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Silent Voices

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Verses of personification

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Comment from Mark Jackson
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I really enjoyed reading this, it demands re-reading. Not quite a riddle but one that requires some reflection. I am guessing you are talking about an ego or a conscience or perhaps both. I think it might be something that requires more than just one coffee to fully understand.

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
    Haha thank you, Mark! Xo
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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It sounds like your constant companionship cannot be ignored here Jessica as you are as large as life itself, a formidable and immovable force to be reckoned with. Or may be this your muse working behind the scenes with a mindful persistence. Either way, your words are powerful and poignant, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
    Thank you so much, Dolly! Xo
Comment from shelley kaye
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very beautifully written poem
great imagistic word choices
smooth rhyme and flow
like the font style used - wistful and dreamy

maybe try the black background and a light yellowish font? just a thought ;)


thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
    Thank you so much! Xo
Comment from patcelaw
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This is very beautifully written for the contest and I wish you the very best in the contest. May you have a wonderful week and may God bless you richly with all good things. Patricia .

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
    :) Thank you so much! Xo
Comment from Barry Penfold
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Oh, so good. The image is just perfect in my opinion. Lovely rhyming and I just love your second last stanza. Thanks for sharing, and I hope you have a great day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
    Thank you so much, Barry!
Comment from Douglas Goff
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Another fine example of poetic beauty. This poem had a neat vibe.

This was the sweet spot:

I'm born of choice, and made in mind,
I am what you command.

Nice work here. You are a master at your craft.
D

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 Comment Written 16-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
    Douglas, thank you so much for this comment. Your encouragement means a great deal to me!
    Xo
    Jess
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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Another beautiful verse in your series, this time your personification of truth. This reads fluently with assured rhyme and a gentle yet compelling message that is truly inspiring. Well done, Jess. Debbie xo

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 Comment Written 16-Apr-2024