Comment from Debi Pick Marquette

Excellent

Wow, you do have a way of making even a silent room talk to you. This is lovely and I considered saving it until Sunday when I had my sixes replenished but I know I will see many more beautiful work from you.

I could imagine myself in every inch of the room as you explained it and I felt the loneliness and empty feeling within. What a remarkable post, Jess.
Great job, my dear!! Love, Debi

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 Comment Written 16-Apr-2024

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I felt the chill of death in your words here Jessica as life just stopped and time managed to freeze the frame as the silence fell and time ran out for this poor soul. A poignant post, no picture required here, your words said it all Jessica, love Dolly x x. x

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 Comment Written 15-Apr-2024