Comment from nancyjam

Excellent

i love this 5-7-5 filled with love. New borns, especially the first ones, are so very special.
I love "wee breaths and tiny heartbeats"
I wish you the best in the contest.
Nancy

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024

Thank you, Nancy, for your sweet review.

Comment from Marilyn Hamilton

Excellent

This is a lovely entry for the 5-7-5 Poetry Contest. I especially liked the use of the word "wee" in this poem. The picture is precious. Thank you for sharing. Good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 13-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024

Thank you, Marilyn.

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

I love the way you've used the small font to reflect the tininess of this baby's life forces! The image is beautiful and your thoughtful and loving 5-7-5 is an excellent reflection. Well done! Debbie

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 Comment Written 13-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2024

Thank you, Debbie. Have a lovely day.