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Dancing

A cinquain poem

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Comment from June Sargent
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Yes, they can dance to their inner music. They can also feel the beats of the songs from the vibrations on the dance floor. Never underestimate the power of music that can stir the soul.

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
    Thank you very much for your wonderful and understanding comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Mark D. R.
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Nicely done! Just as the deaf can dance (to the music), those totally blind can still 'see'/feel the light of day.

I worked with a deaf person. Although he never spoke a word to me, I thought he was funny. We did regularly communicate through his interpreter, or I wrote notes to him. It was a great work experience.

Mark

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
    Thank you, Mark, I think we forget that some people who do not have all we do, still enjoy everything we can, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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A beautiful Cinquain poem that contains such a great message. The artwork adds to the presentation of this piece as well. Thank you for sharing this poem.

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
    Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
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I'm fortunate enough to know this fact well. I was a teacher Of children and teens with special needs for 30 years. I had children who had danced with me and children with Down syndrome danced the most. Thank you for sharing this while written poem it also shares something important with people who may not know that people who cannot hear can still dance. Well written!

Best wishes

Alex


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 Comment Written 10-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
    Thank you, Alex, I am continuously amazed, by the efforts and determination of those that know no different, and want, need, think, believe, lives are the same/normal, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
reply by Alexandra Trovato on 11-Apr-2024
    You're welcome, Kahpot.

    Alex :)
Comment from patcelaw
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A very well written poem for this format and it's a pleasure to read. It also is a pleasure to look at because it is presented very beautifully. Have a good evening and may God bless. Patric.

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 Comment Written 10-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
    Thank you very much for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot