Eclipse
a 5-7-517 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
I'm watching the eclipse now, the live feed from Arkadelphia, Arkansas. I'm always watching the signs in the sky of the Lord's second coming. We are receiving the final stroke of the "X" today over Carbondale, Illinois. Carbondale means, Little Egypt, and X is Chi and Christ in the Greek. An awesome sign of the heavens in our life time. Sending you my best today as always and my very best wishes in the upcoming contest.
Sal :))
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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I'm watching the eclipse now, the live feed from Arkadelphia, Arkansas. I'm always watching the signs in the sky of the Lord's second coming. We are receiving the final stroke of the "X" today over Carbondale, Illinois. Carbondale means, Little Egypt, and X is Chi and Christ in the Greek. An awesome sign of the heavens in our life time. Sending you my best today as always and my very best wishes in the upcoming contest.
Sal :))
Comment Written 08-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Sal
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:))
Comment from Spitfire
Excellent use of alliteration with slowly, shading, shining and sunlight. Also moves and moon. A mathematical metaphor of sorts. It seems like every time this happens, some viewers don't protect their eyes and end up blind!
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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Excellent use of alliteration with slowly, shading, shining and sunlight. Also moves and moon. A mathematical metaphor of sorts. It seems like every time this happens, some viewers don't protect their eyes and end up blind!
Comment Written 08-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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Good thing we have Donald Trump, who can look directly at the moon. He does it better than anyone.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The total eclipse is the talk of the town just now and I enjoyed your offering Bill, a fine 5-7-5 for the contest, I wish you luck, I expect I will miss it, love Dolly x x x x
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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The total eclipse is the talk of the town just now and I enjoyed your offering Bill, a fine 5-7-5 for the contest, I wish you luck, I expect I will miss it, love Dolly x x x x
Comment Written 08-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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I watched it and from where I was it was no great shakes.
Comment from lyenochka
Well, I'm not sure what ggg stands for but here it's not granddaughter etc.
A timely eclipse 575 poem. Hope others get to enjoy what I plan to on TV!
Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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Well, I'm not sure what ggg stands for but here it's not granddaughter etc.
A timely eclipse 575 poem. Hope others get to enjoy what I plan to on TV!
Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 08-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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I set a place holder and neglected to update.
Comment from nomi338
As the light is briefly replaced and covered by the dark, we mankind get the chance to see what it is like to be totally in the dark. Happily and thankfully the darkness is only momentarily. As the light makes its return, we graciously applaud God's mercy and his majesty which is full on display.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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As the light is briefly replaced and covered by the dark, we mankind get the chance to see what it is like to be totally in the dark. Happily and thankfully the darkness is only momentarily. As the light makes its return, we graciously applaud God's mercy and his majesty which is full on display.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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Eclipse over. Seventy years for the next one.
Comment from BethShelby
This is an excellent 5-7=5 poem. It is particularly appropriate for today and I like all the alliteration you have built into it. I wonder if any of the many oddities people have mentioned concerning this eclypse will be of any significance.
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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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This is an excellent 5-7=5 poem. It is particularly appropriate for today and I like all the alliteration you have built into it. I wonder if any of the many oddities people have mentioned concerning this eclypse will be of any significance.
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Comment Written 08-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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Trump is likely responsible for any positive aspects.
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He will definitely claim to be. If anything goes wrong he let us know that Biden did it.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the 5-7-5 poetry Contest. Very nice alliteration all through this piece. Nice eclipse photo for effect. Nicely written. Good luck.
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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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An excellent entry for the 5-7-5 poetry Contest. Very nice alliteration all through this piece. Nice eclipse photo for effect. Nicely written. Good luck.
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Comment Written 08-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Marilyn
