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a naani

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Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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Beautiful entry for the Naani poetry writing pronpt. What a description of the picture you submitted along with the poem. It absolutely looks like warm melting butter. One might even end the poem using a tie-in line like dipping the remaining crumbs of your day as the sun sets. well, you get the idea. lol I tend to over-think. Lovely poem. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
    Thank you so much, Marilyn, for the lovely praise of my Naani.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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That melting sunset is calm and silky just like the butter you reference here, a fine post for the contest, much enjoyed, sunsets are magical and we always enjoy the close of day as night consumes, love Dolly x x x

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 Comment Written 07-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
    I am delighted you enjoyed my sunset poem, Dolly. Many thanks for sharing.