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Comment from Tom Horonzy
Oh my! A noir story to say the least,but please tell me where daddy cuts his meat or else I'm becoming a vegetarian. ð???
Stupid program tells me to type more characters
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Oh my! A noir story to say the least,but please tell me where daddy cuts his meat or else I'm becoming a vegetarian. ð???
Stupid program tells me to type more characters
Comment Written 04-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Yes, it is hard to fill up the space sometimes, I tell jokes. Thanks for the read and the nice comments. Karen
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I never have been capable of telling jokes so I just garble with listerined fingers (type)!
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is very amusing, and that skillet had all kinds of good reasons for flying. That is also a very interesting skillet in the picture. Didn't know there was ever that image on the bottom of a skillet.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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This is very amusing, and that skillet had all kinds of good reasons for flying. That is also a very interesting skillet in the picture. Didn't know there was ever that image on the bottom of a skillet.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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It is a two use skillet , you can cook in side it, abd use the bottom to press into pit top crusts, big cookies, etc. Than ks for the read. Karen
Comment from Ric Myworld
Maybe that's a new way of dieting. Trim off the parts we don't want. LOL. I want to hear more about the multiple menopauses', but not on here. There are too many ears. You know what to do. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
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Maybe that's a new way of dieting. Trim off the parts we don't want. LOL. I want to hear more about the multiple menopauses', but not on here. There are too many ears. You know what to do. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
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okie dokie
Comment from Bill Schott
This is a great story that has it all. We are in the scene with two characters. There is a bit of creative dialogue and some tense action. The best part is dinner with the show.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
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This is a great story that has it all. We are in the scene with two characters. There is a bit of creative dialogue and some tense action. The best part is dinner with the show.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
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I like short stories. They are always my preference. I love Haiku, and other short types of poetry. It is a battle to the death, and when you get it right. It is glorious! Karen :-)
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
How did you do that, Karen! Perfectly constructed to fit into that ridiculously limited 100 word fiction! I could actually feel the tension building and the crunch, bang in the middle, where everything turned. Love the way the skillet had a mind of its own. And I guess her family butcher background will come in handy for disposal of the body. Excellent! Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
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How did you do that, Karen! Perfectly constructed to fit into that ridiculously limited 100 word fiction! I could actually feel the tension building and the crunch, bang in the middle, where everything turned. Love the way the skillet had a mind of its own. And I guess her family butcher background will come in handy for disposal of the body. Excellent! Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 04-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
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I like short stories. They are always my preference. I love Haiku, and other short types of poetry. It is a battle to the death, and when you get it right. It is glorious! Karen :-)
Comment from GWHARGIS
OMG!!!! This one sent me over the edge. I could see it happening. Why do me feel it is their duty to let a woman know she has gained weight. Are we stupid, have our head in the sand. No shit, Sherlock. That's why I'm wearing a 16 and not a ten. I'm glad she popped him on the head. This made me laugh. Gretchen
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
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OMG!!!! This one sent me over the edge. I could see it happening. Why do me feel it is their duty to let a woman know she has gained weight. Are we stupid, have our head in the sand. No shit, Sherlock. That's why I'm wearing a 16 and not a ten. I'm glad she popped him on the head. This made me laugh. Gretchen
Comment Written 04-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
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This is something I have seen many times. I heard a over weight guy in a ratty T shirt, scuffed shoes uneven socks, etc. tell a woman she could be good looking if she took care with her appearance while she was neatly dressed wrangling two toddlers. MEN!!!!!!
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
uhoh There's more of that darkness coming through. lol it's really good but you might need to explain to me. If she is the daughter of a butcher wouldn't she have used a knife? Am I overthinking it? either way. good job. good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
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uhoh There's more of that darkness coming through. lol it's really good but you might need to explain to me. If she is the daughter of a butcher wouldn't she have used a knife? Am I overthinking it? either way. good job. good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
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Too much blood with the knife. And, she was transfering the carrot strips to the pan at the time. Once he is on the tarp she can manage the blood.:-)
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omg rofl I'm not sure I'm glad I asked.
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My mind collects a lot of facts. I tend to be pragmatic by nature. It has lost me friends from time to time. They ask me my opinion I give it to them. They are shocked! When your eyes get better and you read "Rules and regulations on Planet DMK " you will see some of my points of view. Karen
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Comment from royowen
Of course, if one doesn't like rotund figures and decides that they don't deserve to live, then the cast iron skillet is the best thing to hurl, and one could get some choice bits of steak if one knew a butcher, well done, Karen, good post, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
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Of course, if one doesn't like rotund figures and decides that they don't deserve to live, then the cast iron skillet is the best thing to hurl, and one could get some choice bits of steak if one knew a butcher, well done, Karen, good post, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 04-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
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He was huge, and was pointing out her 10 pound weight gain. Not a wise choice to make. :-)
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I agree
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Comment from Rachelle Allen
OH MY FREAKIN GAWD, WOMAN!!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAH!!
I just love the lilting little syntax of all the words you chose for this horror scene! It's like it's being told by a Disney Princess - Snow White, specifically, with that little sing-songy, high-pitched voice of hers.
Just HILARIOUS!!!
There's no way this doesn't make it to the Winner's Circle in the 100 Word Flash Fiction. It is just perfection!!
xoxoxo
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OH MY FREAKIN GAWD, WOMAN!!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAH!!
I just love the lilting little syntax of all the words you chose for this horror scene! It's like it's being told by a Disney Princess - Snow White, specifically, with that little sing-songy, high-pitched voice of hers.
Just HILARIOUS!!!
There's no way this doesn't make it to the Winner's Circle in the 100 Word Flash Fiction. It is just perfection!!
xoxoxo
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Comment Written 04-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
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From your lips to the judges ears! I had fun. Thanks for the read. And the skillet picture was divine! Karen
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I think she could fry up an entire head in that baby!!
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She can use the blood for her roses. She can cook the bones to soften them for bone meal.I read a lot always have, and my brain is a vast warehouse of interesting facts.hahahaha Good thing he insisted on getting the electric meat grinder! Karen
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Yes, quite fortunate, that!! Heeeer, Fido!!
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That made me laugh right out loud. :-)
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That made me laugh right out loud. :-)
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Then my work here is done.
