Agape
pious poem18 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation, teafor2.
-You wrote a good poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery, rhyme, and repeating phrase.
-I like the line about cliches and mantras.
-We certainly don't need those when it comes to faith.
-You do a good job showing what the love story is really about.
-Very well done. Thanks for sharing it.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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-Very nice artwork and presentation, teafor2.
-You wrote a good poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery, rhyme, and repeating phrase.
-I like the line about cliches and mantras.
-We certainly don't need those when it comes to faith.
-You do a good job showing what the love story is really about.
-Very well done. Thanks for sharing it.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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Pam, thanks for your usual detailed, albeit, short, straightforward and
purposeful remarks...Your responses are very encouraging. teafor2
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You are very welcome.
Comment from royowen
The greatest gift of love that cannot be surpassed is God's Son giving Himself up for sacrifice as the only person fit to die for us, and the incredible gift that through Him we can approach the majesty of the Father through faith, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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The greatest gift of love that cannot be surpassed is God's Son giving Himself up for sacrifice as the only person fit to die for us, and the incredible gift that through Him we can approach the majesty of the Father through faith, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 16-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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Roy, thanks for weighing in on this one...Your posts, comments and
sentiments are what in part inspired this:-) teafor2
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Tables and thank you
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:-) teafor2
Comment from patcelaw
Salvation is the greatest love story ever told to mankind. It was the love of Christ, allowing his life to be taken on that old rugby cross that gives it a feeling of love. I wish you the very best with all of your writing and may God bless you. Patricia .
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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Salvation is the greatest love story ever told to mankind. It was the love of Christ, allowing his life to be taken on that old rugby cross that gives it a feeling of love. I wish you the very best with all of your writing and may God bless you. Patricia .
Comment Written 16-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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Thank you for your comments, sentiments, personal remarks and
generous rating. teafor2
Comment from LJbutterfly
The love story is God's Love Story for His creation. God so loved the world....Your smoothly rhymed and inspiring poem reminds us that God is always within easy reach. Your artwork pairs perfectly and intensifies the message of your poem.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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The love story is God's Love Story for His creation. God so loved the world....Your smoothly rhymed and inspiring poem reminds us that God is always within easy reach. Your artwork pairs perfectly and intensifies the message of your poem.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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Thanks for your pious comments, shared sentiments and gracious
remarks. teafor2
Comment from bhogg
I like your post...Well written and beautifully presented. Your rhyme scheme is going to move your reader quickly through. I'm somewhat of a 'word nerd', so am not so sure I like your use of beseech. You've used teach and reach, so don't really have a suggestion, preach maybe!
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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I like your post...Well written and beautifully presented. Your rhyme scheme is going to move your reader quickly through. I'm somewhat of a 'word nerd', so am not so sure I like your use of beseech. You've used teach and reach, so don't really have a suggestion, preach maybe!
Comment Written 16-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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Thanks for your positive comments, honest remarks and generous
stars. teafor2
Comment from Pamusart
Hi, teafor2
I detected a rhyming scheme. A love story with God. That is the best love around. There's no need to beseech me. I willingly welcome that love
Salvation is easy to beseech. Does not sound right. Beseech means to ask fervently or with urgency So Salvation is easy to ask for. But, do we get if we only ask for it?
I enjoyed reading your poem
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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Hi, teafor2
I detected a rhyming scheme. A love story with God. That is the best love around. There's no need to beseech me. I willingly welcome that love
Salvation is easy to beseech. Does not sound right. Beseech means to ask fervently or with urgency So Salvation is easy to ask for. But, do we get if we only ask for it?
I enjoyed reading your poem
Comment Written 16-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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Pamusart, thanks for your candor. The comments and sentiments are
gracious with a generous rating. Your response is appreciated. teafor2
Comment from jessizero
This poem was beautiful. I loved the way you formatted and repeated "a love story." I also liked your rhymes. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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This poem was beautiful. I loved the way you formatted and repeated "a love story." I also liked your rhymes. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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Comment Written 16-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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Thanks for your shared sentiments and generous rating. teafor2
Comment from lyenochka
I love that you entitled it "Agape" - a Love that only God truly can give. Your triolet poem gives the full gospel - about the love of the Lord for humanity!
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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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I love that you entitled it "Agape" - a Love that only God truly can give. Your triolet poem gives the full gospel - about the love of the Lord for humanity!
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Comment Written 16-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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Thanks, for your excellent discernment...The response and rating is appreciated. teafor2