The Diagnosis
A very short story for dog lovers.15 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
Oh dear!
You have fulfilled the requirements well with your story, and I enjoyed the ending. Well done. Sending best wishes for your entry.
Wendy.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2024
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Oh dear!
You have fulfilled the requirements well with your story, and I enjoyed the ending. Well done. Sending best wishes for your entry.
Wendy.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2024
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So pleased you enjoyed my shortie?s ending, Wendy. Many thanks for sharing.
Comment from Bill Schott
This fifty-five-word story, The Diagnosis, has the required word count and allows that if you go to the doctor with a dog you may be diagnosed with fleas.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2024
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This fifty-five-word story, The Diagnosis, has the required word count and allows that if you go to the doctor with a dog you may be diagnosed with fleas.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2024
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Thank you, Bill, for sharing my shortie.
Comment from Brenda Strauser
I liked this story it was humorous. You told the story well in 55 words. I have a hard time telling a story in 100 words. The picture is good and goes well with your story. Very good job.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2024
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I liked this story it was humorous. You told the story well in 55 words. I have a hard time telling a story in 100 words. The picture is good and goes well with your story. Very good job.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2024
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I am so pleased my story amused you, Brenda. Yes, writing a whole story in 55 words is a challenge, but Rockwell provided all the inspiration I needed.
Comment from M_Esther
What a heart-warming story with a funny, surprise ending. Just wondering if another word would work better than "suddenly"? I don't know, I might be wrong. I loved this story overall, and I hope it does well in the contest. Also, I want to say Speckles is a really cute name for a dog.
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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2024
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What a heart-warming story with a funny, surprise ending. Just wondering if another word would work better than "suddenly"? I don't know, I might be wrong. I loved this story overall, and I hope it does well in the contest. Also, I want to say Speckles is a really cute name for a dog.
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Comment Written 21-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2024
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I am so pleased you found my story heart-warming and funny, M Esther. I originally chose Spot for the dog?s name, but thought that was too masculine for her.
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Personally, I prefer Sprinkles :)
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
A very good entry for the 55 Word Story Writing Prompt. The criteria was met with exactly 55 words. This was a cute story with a humorous ending. The artwork that accompanies it works well. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2024
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A very good entry for the 55 Word Story Writing Prompt. The criteria was met with exactly 55 words. This was a cute story with a humorous ending. The artwork that accompanies it works well. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 21-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much, Marilyn, for your review of my shortie. I am glad you found it cute. Rockwell?s art provided all the inspiration.
