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Keep Doing This

In recognition of the Passover meal

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Comment from Daylily
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This is a beautiful message to be sharing for the Resurrection season. It is too easy to get drawn into the commercialization that goes on and we need to stop and think about the real meaning. Thank you for sharing this lovely poetic telling of the Good News Message.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
    Thank you for a very fine review.
Comment from dragonpoet
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Hi Norman,
This poem fits the time of year and reminds us what the mass is. It is what Jesus made it. It is something we do every time we go to church not just once a year. Though Easter is more important.
I agree with you about hate.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Happy St Patrick's Day
Joan

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
    Thank you Joan, it is always a pleasure to hear from you and share our thoughts.
reply by dragonpoet on 17-Mar-2024
    Don't mention it.
    Joan
Comment from BethShelby
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This is a nice poem in remembrance of Christ final meal before his crux fiction. You also remind us that we all came from the same mother and no matter what we want to believe, no one is any better than anyone else that hating another enslaves us rather than frees us. We are all children of God.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
    Than you Beth. If only all alive on the earth today could gain that recognition, I believe that much of the hate and anger would be done away with.
Comment from Ric Myworld
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Thanks for sharing your fine message at the most appropriate time of the year. Like all fruits from the same tree, but not all as sweet as they should be. :-) Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
    I like the way you think and speak. I guess that what helps you as a writer. Thank you brother.
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Good artwork and nice presentation, nomi.
-Your note is appreciated.
-You wrote a good poem with
effective imagery and rhyme.
-You make a good point in the first half
of the poem about how we are all connected
so we shouldn't hate each other.
-The second part shows how we
commemorate the great sacrifice that Jesus made.
-A very good concluding line.
-Very well done; thanks for sharing it.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
    Thank you for sharing your valued insight. I always look forward to reading your wonderful commentary.
reply by Pam (respa) on 17-Mar-2024
    You are very welcome, and I appreciate your reply.
Comment from Bill Schott
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This spiritual poem, Keep Doing This, reminds the readers of the great sacrifice endured for the benefit of mankind, which we will honor officially soon. Faith is the common need for society to succeed.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
    Well stated my good friend. You sometimes surprise me with your displayed depth.
reply by Bill Schott on 17-Mar-2024
    Yup. I'm deep.
Comment from Brenda Strauser
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I enjoyed reading your poem. Where I go to church, we observe this each year. I like your picture. It goes well with the poem. Also, your poem us written well. Very good job 610.685.8000

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
    Thank you, I searched for a picture seldom seen or used.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I agree that we are all God's creatures and brothers and sisters on this planet and we should work together for the greater good. Fine words here and a great read for this Sunday morning, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
    Thank you. I really wanted to write something appropriate for the season.
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
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Yes, my brother and Amen to the blood of the Lamb! For He is the only way!

Nomi, this is a remarkable poem. We are very much on the same page tonight!
Much like the one I just released.
This I believe is your best yet! (that I have read so far of yours)
Great job my dear BBB. Love, Debi

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
    Thanks sis. I was inspired by the season and my gratitude for the sacrifice.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
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Thank you for your gift of this poem reminding us, not just of the last meal of Christ, but of His love and sacrifice for us. It's the time of year to remember, but the gift last forever.

Thank you, friend, for the reminder,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
    Thank you for your kind remarks.