Butterfly
10-7-6 Busso poem27 total reviews
Comment from gramalot8
Butterflies are one of my favorite insects. They seem almost to beautiful to be in the insect category. Lol.
A couple of years ago we were able to go to a hands on museum that had a whole area enclosed and was full of butterflies. It was an amazing experience. Thanks for sharing this with us.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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Butterflies are one of my favorite insects. They seem almost to beautiful to be in the insect category. Lol.
A couple of years ago we were able to go to a hands on museum that had a whole area enclosed and was full of butterflies. It was an amazing experience. Thanks for sharing this with us.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much.
Comment from tempeste
Ciao!
Such a beautiful photo, the black back ground showcases its stunning sunset hues. Patterns and colours help them hide from predators.
Their 3.000 mile journey to Mexico to breed is wondrous.
It's sad to know that some people as a hobby catch and pin these amazing critters in a book.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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Ciao!
Such a beautiful photo, the black back ground showcases its stunning sunset hues. Patterns and colours help them hide from predators.
Their 3.000 mile journey to Mexico to breed is wondrous.
It's sad to know that some people as a hobby catch and pin these amazing critters in a book.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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Yes They catch them and frame them !Thanks so much for dropping by
Comment from jaded831
Monarch butterflies are my favorite. Around my area they are very rare. So even seeing a picture of one makes me smile. Your poem pays tribute to this fine creature. Together they make one fine presentation.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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Monarch butterflies are my favorite. Around my area they are very rare. So even seeing a picture of one makes me smile. Your poem pays tribute to this fine creature. Together they make one fine presentation.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much, my friend.
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Lovely picture and poem. I suggest that you might use "a" instead of "the" in the third line. That butterfly is not the only one, not even The only monarch. My own small opinion. Karen
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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Lovely picture and poem. I suggest that you might use "a" instead of "the" in the third line. That butterfly is not the only one, not even The only monarch. My own small opinion. Karen
Comment Written 15-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much Karen .Good suggestion .I will try it .
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Comment from Tom Horonzy
I was amazed long ago with all the varied butterflies there are yet even today I am pleased God's created these creatures to us since eventually they'll flee to color the rainbows.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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I was amazed long ago with all the varied butterflies there are yet even today I am pleased God's created these creatures to us since eventually they'll flee to color the rainbows.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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True they are so magnificent Thanks for dropping by.
Comment from Daylily
Your posting is presenting a perfectly expressed thought through words and a striking visual.
Butterflies are special creatures that well-represent the beauty this world offers. I enjoyed experiencing your creative work very much.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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Your posting is presenting a perfectly expressed thought through words and a striking visual.
Butterflies are special creatures that well-represent the beauty this world offers. I enjoyed experiencing your creative work very much.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation, Sanku.
-A well written poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery describes the wings, as well
as a good comparison to "His fine art."
-Good use of ethereal in line two.
-A very good concluding line.
-The syllable count is good, except
for the last line. If you want to make
blessed two syllables, you could try
a single apostrophe after the second s and
it would give you the 6 syllables.
-You could put a note about it if
you want, but it has to show up in the poem to count.
-A very good entry; good luck.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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-Very nice artwork and presentation, Sanku.
-A well written poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery describes the wings, as well
as a good comparison to "His fine art."
-Good use of ethereal in line two.
-A very good concluding line.
-The syllable count is good, except
for the last line. If you want to make
blessed two syllables, you could try
a single apostrophe after the second s and
it would give you the 6 syllables.
-You could put a note about it if
you want, but it has to show up in the poem to count.
-A very good entry; good luck.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much .Thanks for that suggestin .I will do that.
Comment from teafor2
Sanku, in these 23 compressed syllables this reader finds that scribe has
diligently accorded fascinating butterfly a unique pedestal and praise. The
picture and sparse verbiage combine to provide a captivating and pious
post. teafor2
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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Sanku, in these 23 compressed syllables this reader finds that scribe has
diligently accorded fascinating butterfly a unique pedestal and praise. The
picture and sparse verbiage combine to provide a captivating and pious
post. teafor2
Comment Written 14-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much
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You are welcome.
Comment from karenina
Who doesn't love butterflies? Great theme as we're all going to welcome your Busso after that photo! Nicely done. I assume you are pronouncing "blessed" Bless-ed? To get the 6 syllables? That's how I pronounce it anyway!
Karenina
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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Who doesn't love butterflies? Great theme as we're all going to welcome your Busso after that photo! Nicely done. I assume you are pronouncing "blessed" Bless-ed? To get the 6 syllables? That's how I pronounce it anyway!
Karenina
Comment Written 14-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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yes , as two syllables .but some says it is single syllabled.Thank you very much for stopping by
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Welcome!
Comment from GWHARGIS
I used to call butterflies "flying Stainglass". It seem appropriate. God has made some unique creatures. Each group and species alike, yet each individual different. This was a beautiful poem. Gretchen
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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I used to call butterflies "flying Stainglass". It seem appropriate. God has made some unique creatures. Each group and species alike, yet each individual different. This was a beautiful poem. Gretchen
Comment Written 14-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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WOW! wonderful moniker .flying stainglass That is exactly what they are Thank you so much.
