The Remote
A way in which I choose to picture my faith in God..33 total reviews
Comment from Sueswrite
I enjoyed your creative presentation for revealing a wonderful awareness of the ultimate distinction between relying on absolute faith and trust in our creator to safely guide and protect, and reaping the affects of a disparaging belief to one's own ability and power. You demonstrated this very nicely and with precise clarity. Best wishes for you!
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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I enjoyed your creative presentation for revealing a wonderful awareness of the ultimate distinction between relying on absolute faith and trust in our creator to safely guide and protect, and reaping the affects of a disparaging belief to one's own ability and power. You demonstrated this very nicely and with precise clarity. Best wishes for you!
Comment Written 01-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked this and felt my metaphor worked. I appreciate the review.
Beth
Comment from Ric Myworld
Yes, ma'am, everything in life is a choice. And those like me have made plenty of bad ones. But faith and trusting God's word is a choice we will never regret. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Yes, ma'am, everything in life is a choice. And those like me have made plenty of bad ones. But faith and trusting God's word is a choice we will never regret. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thank you Ric, I always appreciate you reviews and comments.
Beth
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Beth, I don't think I've ever heard this message more perfectly delivered. It was set in the same context of Jesus's teaching - a parable relating to the times. It said it all. What a beautiful way to help us realize the importance of that GPS, one I never want to be without, either.
Take care,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Beth, I don't think I've ever heard this message more perfectly delivered. It was set in the same context of Jesus's teaching - a parable relating to the times. It said it all. What a beautiful way to help us realize the importance of that GPS, one I never want to be without, either.
Take care,
Rhonda
Comment Written 01-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much Rhonda. I'm glad you feel my metaphor works.
I appreciate the review.
Beth
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The metaphor was very relatable!!
Comment from Wendy G
Excellent parable, and a great way to explain the life of faith. I wish I still had a six, but I am sure this one will do very well in the contest, and I send good wishes. I liked the parallels very much.
Wendy
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Excellent parable, and a great way to explain the life of faith. I wish I still had a six, but I am sure this one will do very well in the contest, and I send good wishes. I liked the parallels very much.
Wendy
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thank you Wendy. i really appreciate the review and comments. I so glad you liked my metaphor.
Beth
Comment from Spitfire
This is an awesome metaphor that fits 'faith'
so well with its references to self control versus a super guidance system. A great price covers the crucifixtion of Christ.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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This is an awesome metaphor that fits 'faith'
so well with its references to self control versus a super guidance system. A great price covers the crucifixtion of Christ.
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much for a great review and six stars. I pleased you felt the metaphor worked.
Beth
Comment from Dawn Munro
This is a fabulous use of metaphor, IMHO. I have only one suggestion for your consideration...
"This system was purchased at a great price for those that wish to have it as part of their boat." -- Why not make mention that 'the system' is offered to us at no cost, we simply have to choose it?
Best of luck in the contest. This is a jewel!
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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This is a fabulous use of metaphor, IMHO. I have only one suggestion for your consideration...
"This system was purchased at a great price for those that wish to have it as part of their boat." -- Why not make mention that 'the system' is offered to us at no cost, we simply have to choose it?
Best of luck in the contest. This is a jewel!
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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That is good idea Dawn. I was going to work that in but it will mean rearrangeing some line as it has to exactly 300 words. I'll work on it. Thank you for a great review.
Beth
Comment from jim vecchio
A fantastically great analogy. I'll have to share it with the moderator of our Bible Class, who used to spend much time in boating. I know when I piloted my own ship, I headed Straight for doom. Now, I may err at times, but the One who guides the Remote guides me safely on.
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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A fantastically great analogy. I'll have to share it with the moderator of our Bible Class, who used to spend much time in boating. I know when I piloted my own ship, I headed Straight for doom. Now, I may err at times, but the One who guides the Remote guides me safely on.
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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I'm so glad you enjoyed this, I'm not sure it is what the contest has in mind, but it was what I decided to write. Feel free to share it.
Beth
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It was about what Faith means to you, and you certainly wrote that!
Comment from mermaids
I enjoyed reading your essay on faith. I like the analogy to being in a boat and crossing the ocean, needing a remote which is faith and God is the super power. I also like how you mention we have a choice to use the remote or attempt to cross the ocean by ourselves. Excellent writing that draws the reader in and gives a good spiritual lesson.
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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I enjoyed reading your essay on faith. I like the analogy to being in a boat and crossing the ocean, needing a remote which is faith and God is the super power. I also like how you mention we have a choice to use the remote or attempt to cross the ocean by ourselves. Excellent writing that draws the reader in and gives a good spiritual lesson.
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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Thank you for the excellent review. I glad you think this way of expressing our journey through life works.
Beth
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
This is an interesting metaphor. We are in competition, but I will admit yours is good. Rats! I will wish you good luck in the contest. Is it really bad of me to really want to wish you second Place? :-)
Karen
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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This is an interesting metaphor. We are in competition, but I will admit yours is good. Rats! I will wish you good luck in the contest. Is it really bad of me to really want to wish you second Place? :-)
Karen
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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Thank you, Karen and I will except any place I can get or none. I've won more than my share lately. It the last four months I've won five. Before that it took years to win even one.
Beth
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I haven't won first in a while, I admit out loud I get giddy when I get a first. Don't you?
Kare :-)
Comment from Ben Colder
I like the way you explain safety in Christ. Yes, he is our captain of our boat and we are safe as long as He is in charge. Good one, Beth. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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I like the way you explain safety in Christ. Yes, he is our captain of our boat and we are safe as long as He is in charge. Good one, Beth. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much for the review. I'm glad you like my explanation.
Beth
