Comment from Baltimore Born

Excellent

This is a well-written story. Good use of exactly 75 words in this contest. I liked the flow of the conversation between the characters. The ending of the story was very good. Overall, excellent job.

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024

Thank you, Baltimore.

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

That first sentence is missing something, maybe like ", but they were not really friends." I'm aware that would affect your word count, though. Your story was funny in very few words. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

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 Comment Written 28-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024

Thank you, Jesse. The word count was tough.

Comment from Brenda Strauser

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your poem. The ending was funny. My sons used to play baseball when they were young. I enjoyed watching them. this was written well. very good job

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 Comment Written 28-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024

Thank you, Brenda.
Much appreciated.