The Jagged Edge
monsters return!22 total reviews
Comment from BethShelby
You do a really good job with horror and by dealing with a subject we know is dangerous you are able to make ;you story feel as though it could really happens. It object was to scare us and may have succeeded. Good luck with this is nicely written.
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You do a really good job with horror and by dealing with a subject we know is dangerous you are able to make ;you story feel as though it could really happens. It object was to scare us and may have succeeded. Good luck with this is nicely written.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2024
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Oh my! What a great piece of horror writing. The fact is, it's most horrifying because you made it seem quite believable. It could happen, and who knows how much harm we've already caused with the wanton use of radioactivity?
Great story,
Take care,
Rhonda
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Oh my! What a great piece of horror writing. The fact is, it's most horrifying because you made it seem quite believable. It could happen, and who knows how much harm we've already caused with the wanton use of radioactivity?
Great story,
Take care,
Rhonda
Comment Written 28-Feb-2024
Comment from Sueswrite
Your writing kept me intrigued throughout the entire story by keeping a continuous spark flickering to entice me into needing to know what was going to happen next! This normally wouldn't be a subject of interest to me, but you sincerely made it work! I love it! Best wishes to you and thank you for sharing this!
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Your writing kept me intrigued throughout the entire story by keeping a continuous spark flickering to entice me into needing to know what was going to happen next! This normally wouldn't be a subject of interest to me, but you sincerely made it work! I love it! Best wishes to you and thank you for sharing this!
Comment Written 28-Feb-2024
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Oh wow, that's a horror tale and a half, Jim! With a very salient ending. Your story, as ever, is excellently structured and evolves almost realistically in its enthralling horror theme. Very impressive and a strong contender. Good luck! Debbie
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Oh wow, that's a horror tale and a half, Jim! With a very salient ending. Your story, as ever, is excellently structured and evolves almost realistically in its enthralling horror theme. Very impressive and a strong contender. Good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 27-Feb-2024
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
You have found your genre. You do this scifi/ horror/ fantasy stuff so well. This is another winner. I just love it. What did the doctor say about the butt pills?
Karen :-)
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You have found your genre. You do this scifi/ horror/ fantasy stuff so well. This is another winner. I just love it. What did the doctor say about the butt pills?
Karen :-)
Comment Written 27-Feb-2024
Comment from lyenochka
Jim, you have such an imagination! This one reminded me of Jules Verne and the Mysterious Island. You went one step further by giving us a Christian viewpoint of recognizing how mankind has messed with Creation and that's why we have the problems we have. Best wishes in the contest!
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Jim, you have such an imagination! This one reminded me of Jules Verne and the Mysterious Island. You went one step further by giving us a Christian viewpoint of recognizing how mankind has messed with Creation and that's why we have the problems we have. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 27-Feb-2024
Comment from royowen
Oh yes, if man continues to thumb our collective noses at God, and despite His loving, long suffering nature, the boom eventually will be lowered and man will find out that his pride ridden, arrogant ways will bring a recommence he wasn't expecting, beautifully written Roy
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Oh yes, if man continues to thumb our collective noses at God, and despite His loving, long suffering nature, the boom eventually will be lowered and man will find out that his pride ridden, arrogant ways will bring a recommence he wasn't expecting, beautifully written Roy
Comment Written 27-Feb-2024
Comment from John Ciarmello
I totally enjoyed this story, Jim! There is a pronounced message in all your fiction, and that's precisely why I enjoy your writing.
I wish you much success with the contest if it hasn't ended yet!
Best, JohnC
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I totally enjoyed this story, Jim! There is a pronounced message in all your fiction, and that's precisely why I enjoy your writing.
I wish you much success with the contest if it hasn't ended yet!
Best, JohnC
Comment Written 27-Feb-2024
Comment from barbara.wilkey
?Hablas español? (This computer doesn't so Spanish well. LOL)
This is a great Horror contest entry. I enjoyed reading. I thought the Horror contest just ended. Maybe I'm wrong or another one is coming up. I enjoyed reading. Good luck with the contest.
"You're joshin'us!" laughed Rice. (Laughed, it's not a speech tag)
The Cannibal Snail. (I couldn't help but laugh. My husband has waged war on all snails. They continue to destroy his garden. The snails keep winning.)
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?Hablas español? (This computer doesn't so Spanish well. LOL)
This is a great Horror contest entry. I enjoyed reading. I thought the Horror contest just ended. Maybe I'm wrong or another one is coming up. I enjoyed reading. Good luck with the contest.
"You're joshin'us!" laughed Rice. (Laughed, it's not a speech tag)
The Cannibal Snail. (I couldn't help but laugh. My husband has waged war on all snails. They continue to destroy his garden. The snails keep winning.)
Comment Written 27-Feb-2024
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Pretty scary stuff! I'll never go swimming again as long as I live!
Vert well written. Good work. Error free as near as I could tell.
And good luck in the contest.
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Pretty scary stuff! I'll never go swimming again as long as I live!
Vert well written. Good work. Error free as near as I could tell.
And good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2024