Mrs. McLump and Sir Meowy
Rhymed poem on story Mrs. McLump takes Sir Meowy to Tea17 total reviews
Comment from Dawn Munro
Hahahaha!!! This is adorable, and written by a poet who (obviously) knows cats.
My favorite lines --
"Sir Meowy yawned; he'd had his fill of salmon and crab cakes
and closed his eyes to take a nap, not dwell on past mistakes."
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2024
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Hahahaha!!! This is adorable, and written by a poet who (obviously) knows cats.
My favorite lines --
"Sir Meowy yawned; he'd had his fill of salmon and crab cakes
and closed his eyes to take a nap, not dwell on past mistakes."
Comment Written 24-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2024
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Thank you for your great review and the generous six stars.
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You're very welcome.
Comment from Gloria ....
Very well done, Crystie. The cats going out for tea and cakes certainly had a lot of good things on the menu.
Too bad Sir Meowy acted like a cat with those awful claws of his.
This is a delightful poem for this contest and I wish you great luck with the Committee. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2024
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Very well done, Crystie. The cats going out for tea and cakes certainly had a lot of good things on the menu.
Too bad Sir Meowy acted like a cat with those awful claws of his.
This is a delightful poem for this contest and I wish you great luck with the Committee. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 24-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2024
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from royowen
I rather like this poem, it seems like Mr Meowy is a wise cat, one doesn't cling to the ways and mistakes of the past, and simply moves on. What good advice. Beautifully written my friend. Good luck in the state and nationals, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2024
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I rather like this poem, it seems like Mr Meowy is a wise cat, one doesn't cling to the ways and mistakes of the past, and simply moves on. What good advice. Beautifully written my friend. Good luck in the state and nationals, blessings Roy
Comment Written 24-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2024
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Thank you for your great review.
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Most welcome
Comment from Jodi Ann Anderson
This poem is so cute!
Your rhyming is perfect and tells a sweet story. Good luck with your state and national poetry contests!I hope you win!
I'm new to Fanstory, but so far I'm addicted!
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2024
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This poem is so cute!
Your rhyming is perfect and tells a sweet story. Good luck with your state and national poetry contests!I hope you win!
I'm new to Fanstory, but so far I'm addicted!
Comment Written 24-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2024
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Thank you for your super review today.
Comment from JP_Ryan
I do love this poem, it is so infectious and rhythmic and it leaves me with cute images of kittens at a tea party, I love it, its the perfect escape from the hum drum of life. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2024
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I do love this poem, it is so infectious and rhythmic and it leaves me with cute images of kittens at a tea party, I love it, its the perfect escape from the hum drum of life. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2024
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Thank you much for stopping by to read and review.
Comment from lyenochka
What a naughty Mr. Meowy! I think Mrs. McLump needs to offer to restore the pillows. Sigh. But what a cute story poem you have made of a very realistic cat behavior. Even though the ladies are a bit over the top with their treating cats as humans at teatime. Best wishes in the contest!
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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2024
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What a naughty Mr. Meowy! I think Mrs. McLump needs to offer to restore the pillows. Sigh. But what a cute story poem you have made of a very realistic cat behavior. Even though the ladies are a bit over the top with their treating cats as humans at teatime. Best wishes in the contest!
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Comment Written 24-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much for your great review. I like using humor by exaggeration. I bet Mrs. McLump handed her friend something to compensate her for the pillows getting ruined on the way out the door a bit later.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fun story full of action with these characters and I loved the witty dialogue and inventive story for the contest, I wish you luck Crystie, a fine read, love Dolly x x x
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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2024
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A fun story full of action with these characters and I loved the witty dialogue and inventive story for the contest, I wish you luck Crystie, a fine read, love Dolly x x x
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Comment Written 24-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. One of these days I ought to actually try petit fours, but I'm leaving my cat, Meowy, at home when I do.
