The Bus Stop
a horror story12 total reviews
Comment from Ulla
Oh dear, Bill. This was an ominous write. It took me a few moments to grasp.what was going on. But when I did I held my breath. All the best of luck in the contest. Ulla::)))
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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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Oh dear, Bill. This was an ominous write. It took me a few moments to grasp.what was going on. But when I did I held my breath. All the best of luck in the contest. Ulla::)))
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Comment Written 23-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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Thank you, Ulla.
Comment from lyenochka
This is a wild horror story, Bill. I guess there's no point in complaining to the director when there's no bridge and no bus! Best wishes in the contest!
passeengers raced by (passengers)
out the front widshield (windshield)
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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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This is a wild horror story, Bill. I guess there's no point in complaining to the director when there's no bridge and no bus! Best wishes in the contest!
passeengers raced by (passengers)
out the front widshield (windshield)
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Comment Written 23-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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This is why people avoid ghost buses.
