2024 Gypsy's Free Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "You Come To Me".
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Comment from royowen
What a lovely piece of writing Gypsy, a day dedicating one's love for others is a commitment that is important especially to that person that is significant in one's life, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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What a lovely piece of writing Gypsy, a day dedicating one's love for others is a commitment that is important especially to that person that is significant in one's life, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 14-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much, Roy.
Gypsy
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Gypsy, your poem is heartfelt and is filled with good sensory appeal.
Of special note:
My soul is full to the brim
with all the things seen and unseen
that show Your love for me
(The above is so true, especially the "unseen," the little things that those who love us do for us each and every day just to make our life better/easier or just because ... )
Beautiful contemplative artwork choice. Well done. Xo. M
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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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Hi Gypsy, your poem is heartfelt and is filled with good sensory appeal.
Of special note:
My soul is full to the brim
with all the things seen and unseen
that show Your love for me
(The above is so true, especially the "unseen," the little things that those who love us do for us each and every day just to make our life better/easier or just because ... )
Beautiful contemplative artwork choice. Well done. Xo. M
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Comment Written 14-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Happy valentine's day!
Gypsy
Comment from jessizero
This really sounds like true love, romantic and sweet. Happy Valentine's Day - this was a wonderful poem for the holiday. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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This really sounds like true love, romantic and sweet. Happy Valentine's Day - this was a wonderful poem for the holiday. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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Comment Written 14-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
