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A 1-6-1 Poem25 total reviews
Comment from Andrea Kepple
I emotionally reacted to your poem. There is a truth in your poem for too many children in the world.
I like the image your paired with the poem. I like how everything is in shades of grey, it helps set the emotional resonance for the poem.
Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
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I emotionally reacted to your poem. There is a truth in your poem for too many children in the world.
I like the image your paired with the poem. I like how everything is in shades of grey, it helps set the emotional resonance for the poem.
Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much, yes, the children are suffering so much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from jaded831
Deeply moving, eyes are the windows to the soul. Children's eyes are expressive and such pain digs deep. You chose the perfect picture to top your heart wrenching poem. An awesome combination.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
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Deeply moving, eyes are the windows to the soul. Children's eyes are expressive and such pain digs deep. You chose the perfect picture to top your heart wrenching poem. An awesome combination.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Wendy G
This world is an incredibly sad place for many millions of little ones, and it shouldn't be so. Excellent theme, words and photo. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
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This world is an incredibly sad place for many millions of little ones, and it shouldn't be so. Excellent theme, words and photo. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 06-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
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Thank you so very much
Comment from Douglas Goff
Interesting write. This piece of poetry lends itself to more questions than it answers.
I think you are going to take this! We shall see together! Good work.
D
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Interesting write. This piece of poetry lends itself to more questions than it answers.
I think you are going to take this! We shall see together! Good work.
D
Comment Written 05-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much,D
Comment from Raul1
It depends on what kind of childhood some people had, whether it was good or sad. It is what makes a person. But people change their lives for good. Nice poem . Good luck!
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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It depends on what kind of childhood some people had, whether it was good or sad. It is what makes a person. But people change their lives for good. Nice poem . Good luck!
Comment Written 05-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much
Comment from Brenda Strauser
Wow, what a powerful picture and words. This makes me think of all the children in Israel that have been killed. War is so senseless. Your picture is great for your words. Very good job.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Wow, what a powerful picture and words. This makes me think of all the children in Israel that have been killed. War is so senseless. Your picture is great for your words. Very good job.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Thank you so very much
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
I like this poignant 1-6-1 Poem for the writing prompt. The artwork adds a lot to the presentation. Thank you for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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I like this poignant 1-6-1 Poem for the writing prompt. The artwork adds a lot to the presentation. Thank you for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Thank you so very much
Comment from Begin Again
What pain, sorrow, or unhappiness lies within this young child's heart and soul, and why do tears always spill from his eyes? A few words to say so much. Good luck in the contest.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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What pain, sorrow, or unhappiness lies within this young child's heart and soul, and why do tears always spill from his eyes? A few words to say so much. Good luck in the contest.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 05-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Thank you so very much
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I like verse that make us think beyond the words which this one does. Sometimes we bottle up so much as we get older that we forget the very natural and therapeutic act of crying as a means to address sadness and, hopefully move on. But that child inside us needs to have a voice. I hope IO haven't gone too far astray. Nicely done here with even an internal rhyme. Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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I like verse that make us think beyond the words which this one does. Sometimes we bottle up so much as we get older that we forget the very natural and therapeutic act of crying as a means to address sadness and, hopefully move on. But that child inside us needs to have a voice. I hope IO haven't gone too far astray. Nicely done here with even an internal rhyme. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 05-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much, and no youhave understood my intention wonderfully
Comment from zanya
This is a very interesting and philosophical posed here effectively in this very short format and rhymed poem yet furnishes the reader with food for thought
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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This is a very interesting and philosophical posed here effectively in this very short format and rhymed poem yet furnishes the reader with food for thought
Comment Written 05-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much