Blue Valentine
12 line poem for Valentine's Day21 total reviews
Comment from Navada
I really enjoyed this reflection on the nature of steady, constant, lasting love, unlike the "red" flare of passion that Valentine's Day so often trumpets but that often leads to heartbreak. I like the envelope reference at the end with its combined inference of a Valentine's Day card and love letters.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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I really enjoyed this reflection on the nature of steady, constant, lasting love, unlike the "red" flare of passion that Valentine's Day so often trumpets but that often leads to heartbreak. I like the envelope reference at the end with its combined inference of a Valentine's Day card and love letters.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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Thank you for such a kind review.
Comment from QC Poet
Thank you for Sharing your Valentines from being in a romance thats not close by. Your words and notes are especially helpful in understanding how this poem all came together. Blessings and Good Luck with your entry.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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Thank you for Sharing your Valentines from being in a romance thats not close by. Your words and notes are especially helpful in understanding how this poem all came together. Blessings and Good Luck with your entry.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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Thank you for a thoughtful review.
Comment from Kristeen Cherney
Beautiful poem! I love the sensory details you use, such as the lines "When spring is near, I'll blush and reminisce" and "Where gentians sway--the way we used to dance." Well done!
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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Beautiful poem! I love the sensory details you use, such as the lines "When spring is near, I'll blush and reminisce" and "Where gentians sway--the way we used to dance." Well done!
Comment Written 05-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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Thank you for your very generous review and the specific details you liked.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a sweet natured and well worded poem for Valentine's day Crystie and I enjoyed your celebration of this beautiful flower for Valentine's day, a joy to read, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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This is a sweet natured and well worded poem for Valentine's day Crystie and I enjoyed your celebration of this beautiful flower for Valentine's day, a joy to read, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 05-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much for your super review. Bet you can tell your book of flower poetry has influenced me a bit.
Comment from lyenochka
This is a beautiful Valentine's Day poem and I like it that it's not the common red but celebrates the loyal true blue of this beautiful field flower. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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This is a beautiful Valentine's Day poem and I like it that it's not the common red but celebrates the loyal true blue of this beautiful field flower. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 05-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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Thank you for your enthusiastic review.
Comment from pome lover
a very nice poem for a long distance romance.
I see you have a long history of writing poetry.
This one is lovely and it's accompanied by a pretty picture of the deep blue gentian. Most enjoyable.
Katharine
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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a very nice poem for a long distance romance.
I see you have a long history of writing poetry.
This one is lovely and it's accompanied by a pretty picture of the deep blue gentian. Most enjoyable.
Katharine
Comment Written 05-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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Thank you for your very nice review.
Comment from Douglas Goff
Valentine's Day coming already? Oh my. Better get myself something! HA!
This is a great little poem for the season. I hope you find great fortune in the upcoming Valentine's Day competition.
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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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Valentine's Day coming already? Oh my. Better get myself something! HA!
This is a great little poem for the season. I hope you find great fortune in the upcoming Valentine's Day competition.
D
Comment Written 05-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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Thank you for your great review and well wishes.
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Excellent writing. It is full of good emotion and imagery. I best like the line:
'Our love may never flare dramatic red but like the gentian, it's complete and true.'
The photo image supports your words well. Thank you for sharing this. Many writers will relate to this. I enjoyed reviewing it.
Best wishes!
Alex
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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Excellent writing. It is full of good emotion and imagery. I best like the line:
'Our love may never flare dramatic red but like the gentian, it's complete and true.'
The photo image supports your words well. Thank you for sharing this. Many writers will relate to this. I enjoyed reviewing it.
Best wishes!
Alex
Comment Written 05-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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Thank you for your super review. And also for pointing out the lines you liked.
Comment from royowen
Most creatively written, oh yes long distance declaration and communication are still very much written, and what a wonderful way of doing it with the illustration that Jesus Himself might have made, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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Most creatively written, oh yes long distance declaration and communication are still very much written, and what a wonderful way of doing it with the illustration that Jesus Himself might have made, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 05-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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Thank you for your excellent review.
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Most welcome
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
I did not know that milkweeds are called gentians
I like your poem
The thought of a milk weed giving out the romantic characteristics of romance is quite a love gesture.
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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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I did not know that milkweeds are called gentians
I like your poem
The thought of a milk weed giving out the romantic characteristics of romance is quite a love gesture.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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Thank you for your super review. I guess there are quite a few species of gentians and milkweeds.