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Take Nothing for Granted

A 50 word story

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Comment from Pangalactic
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Haha! This definitely fits in the "humorous" category. Great picture to go along with your fifty word short story. I was going to let you know that there were 51 words but (as you obvious know) hyphenated words count as one single.
Anyways, great funny piece you've built here

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 Comment Written 31-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 31-Jan-2024
    I am so pleased my story evoked a laugh, Pangalactic. Many thanks for sharing.
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
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What a smart kid. I guess he did not need an IQ test. lol I think when parents take their child to a doctor that is asking the child to pull down his pants, the parents should be there. This was cute for the contest.

Best wishes,

Alex

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 Comment Written 31-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 31-Jan-2024
    Hi, Alex. Thanks for sharing and praising my shortie. I think today a parent is usually present when a child is examined. This may not have been true in Rockwell?s day.
reply by Alexandra Trovato on 31-Jan-2024
    Oh right We have several prints of his my husband's favorite artist. Thanks for replying. I was thinking what's wrong with this picture. Yes, that's how it was, since Rockwell was realistic. I didn't realize who it was. :)