Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

A lovely, sensual and compelling verse as nature and two people in love become conjoined in musical harmony. Beautifully expressed. Thank you, Gypsy. Debbie

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024

Thank you very much, Debbie.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

This is a well written poem with good imagery and very powerful yet sensitive words. The image here supports your words and helps to bring them to life. I enjoyed reviewing this. Best wishes!

Alexan

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 Comment Written 18-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024

Thank you very much, Alexan.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from jim vecchio

Excellent

Oh, Gypsy, you make me want to be in love again. Your words are more than words, they are flowing expressions painted with melted chocolate hearts topped with marshmallows and whipped cream. I just want to eat them up!

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 Comment Written 18-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024

LoL Thank you, Jim, but please don't eat my words. LoL

Thank you very much, Jim.

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reply by jim vecchio on 19-Jan-2024

Your words would fill my appetite all day long!