When the Truth Hurts
Some pain doesn't leave52 total reviews
Comment from jmdg1954
Rachelle, I'm sorry I'm late to the party as you have already won the contest. CONGRATULATIONS!
Your words told in conjunction with the photo had my mind wondering as to how he became confined to the wheelchair. I can feel the pride in who ill say is the son pushing the chair with all his grit and might, proudly.
Confined to the wheelchair does not mean he cannot contribute or achieve greatness. Just ask President Roosevelt.
Great post and congrats again!
John
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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Rachelle, I'm sorry I'm late to the party as you have already won the contest. CONGRATULATIONS!
Your words told in conjunction with the photo had my mind wondering as to how he became confined to the wheelchair. I can feel the pride in who ill say is the son pushing the chair with all his grit and might, proudly.
Confined to the wheelchair does not mean he cannot contribute or achieve greatness. Just ask President Roosevelt.
Great post and congrats again!
John
Comment Written 19-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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What a good point that it. Thanks for this really nice review, John. xoxo
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You're welcome. Unfortunately I am null and void of sixes...
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Who needs sixes with a warm and thoughtful review like that? I was happy as could be. xo
Comment from Mark D. R.
Rachelle,
Congratulations on this contest entry.
Your choice of artwork is perfectly in sync with your words. So many soldiers did not make it home from the wars. At least this one is the exception, albeit maimed, and being likely pushed by his son.
Mark
P.S. I would have added a period after 'forever.'
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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Rachelle,
Congratulations on this contest entry.
Your choice of artwork is perfectly in sync with your words. So many soldiers did not make it home from the wars. At least this one is the exception, albeit maimed, and being likely pushed by his son.
Mark
P.S. I would have added a period after 'forever.'
Comment Written 19-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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Thanks very much
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I just changed it. Thanks for that eagle-eye catch! xo
Comment from artisart4u
True, but with faith we will make it through.
You have the required 12 words and they mean so much.
Congratulations on your awards and winning this contest.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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True, but with faith we will make it through.
You have the required 12 words and they mean so much.
Congratulations on your awards and winning this contest.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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Thanks.
Comment from John Ciarmello
Hi Rachelle! Congratulations on your first-place win.
This piece says it all for our fighting men and women in all service branches. I have a deep respect for these gals and guys. I know I couldn't do what they do.
Your words, as well as your artwork, are beautiful and bittersweet.
Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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Hi Rachelle! Congratulations on your first-place win.
This piece says it all for our fighting men and women in all service branches. I have a deep respect for these gals and guys. I know I couldn't do what they do.
Your words, as well as your artwork, are beautiful and bittersweet.
Best, JohnC
Comment Written 19-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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They are as altruistic as Life gets, aren't they? They are the angels who walk among us.
Thanks for the this really nice review, John. xoxo
Comment from Mrs. KT
So very true, Rachelle... so very true...
Congratulations on this emotive and heart-wrenching poetic offering.
Some wounds do, indeed, last forever...
Best wishes!
diane
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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So very true, Rachelle... so very true...
Congratulations on this emotive and heart-wrenching poetic offering.
Some wounds do, indeed, last forever...
Best wishes!
diane
Comment Written 19-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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Thanks, Diane. I knew you'd understand. xoxo
Comment from godlucifer
i think sometime it takes years for pain to heal. depends on what it is but wounds can be heal in time. your poem was truly creative of a write. thanks for the read.
truly
godlucifer
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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i think sometime it takes years for pain to heal. depends on what it is but wounds can be heal in time. your poem was truly creative of a write. thanks for the read.
truly
godlucifer
Comment Written 19-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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You are right.
Comment from jenintorre
This is so true. You have told a complete story in just 12 words and the picture illustrates it perfectly. A fabulous entry for the competition. Good luck and best wishes. Jen
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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This is so true. You have told a complete story in just 12 words and the picture illustrates it perfectly. A fabulous entry for the competition. Good luck and best wishes. Jen
Comment Written 19-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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Thank you, Jen. I hope others feel like you do! xoxox
Comment from June Sargent
A sobering reminder that mere platitudes cannot relieve the deep pain that comes from wounds. Many of which are invisible. Empathy requires more than words. We need to see love in action. Thank you for your insightful words.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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A sobering reminder that mere platitudes cannot relieve the deep pain that comes from wounds. Many of which are invisible. Empathy requires more than words. We need to see love in action. Thank you for your insightful words.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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I really love this review. You bottom-lined this perfectly. Thanks for the validation. I couldn't appreciate it more.
Comment from GregoryCody
This is well written, mystery writer. ACTUALLY And ISN'T, pull the verse along really nicely. Tbh I'm not entirely even sure why. It is something with the meter or feet. It sounds great.
Same with Heals All Wounds.
AND a powerful message.
Really hard to do that in so few words!
Great piece!!!
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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This is well written, mystery writer. ACTUALLY And ISN'T, pull the verse along really nicely. Tbh I'm not entirely even sure why. It is something with the meter or feet. It sounds great.
Same with Heals All Wounds.
AND a powerful message.
Really hard to do that in so few words!
Great piece!!!
Comment Written 19-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much. I notice that you're a very "instinctive" reader. You always comment on the 'sounds' aspect, which I like a lot. It's unique, and I always appreciate it. Were you an auditory learner in school?
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Hi! I actually learned everything Here! From some great writers early on. I just really like the way you make the words flow together. They make the read very smooth! Fun to read.
Comment from Jacob1395
Its definitely true that time doesn't heal all wounds, particularly when you've lost a loved one as well. A well written, powerful piece of writing that I think will resonate with many people. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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Its definitely true that time doesn't heal all wounds, particularly when you've lost a loved one as well. A well written, powerful piece of writing that I think will resonate with many people. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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Another reviewer put it astutely when, to that same thought as yours, she added, "Over time, you miss them more, so the pain increases." I had to agree with that.
Anyway, thank you for this kind review. I appreciate it very much.