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The Will-y

The Will-y

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Comment from lyenochka
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You're so funny! Die of "free willy." That whale that played the part of "Free Willy" didn't have a great life after he was "freed." That whale would say that "freedom" is definitely overrated. He'd much rather be cared for by humans. Interesting essay for your 100 word entry. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2024

Comment from Wayne Fowler
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I think I see now why I did not enter this contest. One hundred words - phooey!
I must admit that I don't understand who the players are: the female born on a particular day, the mother of all reasons, or the one trying to navigate through their bad choices.
Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2024

Comment from jmdg1954
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Hmmm.
Not sure I understand the two free Willy references. I saw the movie many years ago. I don't get the swamp of the jungle die free Willy reference.

Besides that I applaud the good writing.

John

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2024

Comment from Navada
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Yes, free will is very important, but it obviously has its limits. When abused, it can obviously turn nasty! Thanks for the share and good luck for the contest.

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2024

Comment from ImaginosBuzzardoDesdinova
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A curious tale. I enjoyed reading it and found myself smiling. You're a very good storyteller. Keep up the good work. Excellent job. And now its time to stop praising well deserving writers and have some soup.

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Comment from Douglas Goff
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That is a most interesting 100 Word Story. Did you put the language war I h for the word CRAP. Made me chuckle because we argue with our pre/teens about saying that.

Anyways, good luck in the competition.
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 Comment Written 11-Jan-2024