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15 total reviews 
Comment from Julie Helms
Exceptional
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This poem is shattering and beautiful. Boy did I feel it deep in my gut. I have feelings like this from time to time and they're usually directed toward God. His unconditional love is perfect. Thank you so much for peeling back the layers and showing us the beauty underneath. Julie

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 03-Jan-2024
    It is about Jesus.

    I'm happy you can relate. Thank you for the exceptional six stars review.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Douglas Goff
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Oh my! Everyone deserves to be loved with that intensity at least one e in their life.

Great coloring, photos, and hues. I enjoyed this one, but I enjoy all of your works.
Douglas

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 03-Jan-2024
    Thank you very much, Douglas, may you have a wonderful day.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from LateBloomer
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Hi Gypsy, today you wrote something brave. You work hard towards happiness each and every day, and your writing gives happiness and insight to others. You are an asset to the FS family. Of special note:

I love You,
as you travel
through timeless dawns
that glide across the ages
to touch my life.

Well done. Keep the blue waters flowing. Xo. M


 Comment Written 03-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 03-Jan-2024
    Thank you very much, my friend, may you have a wonderful day.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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Gypsy, do you feel better about yourself now? Writing will help the anxiety and will release the tension within yourself. If you cannot talk to someone sit down with a pen and a piece of paper and write away your thoughts.

Keep creating these lovely poems and gorgeous images.

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 Comment Written 03-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 03-Jan-2024
    I do feel better. I have a good doctor and found the right medication... maybe I should write that in my author notes. I live with my daughter and grandson. He is a precious little boy, I take care of him.

    I still feel bad about myself but I'm working on it.

    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from patcelaw
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I am glad you're sharing this because I'm sure there are others out there who have experienced the same thing that you are experiencing it from time to time not only is it good for others to read these things but it's also good for you to write them. May God bless you with every good thing. Patricia.

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 Comment Written 03-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 03-Jan-2024
    Thank you, Patricia. I appreciate your beautiful review and kind words. I hope I do help someone here reading my story.

    Gypsy hugs