Birdbath
A much-loved feature in my garden15 total reviews
Comment from jmdg1954
Hi. We have one perennial hibiscus plant, about twelve years now that attracts hummingbirds. I find that to be so cool.
I may have to get terracotta bowl or a bird bath placed in my garden in 2024. As long as they don't mess with my tomatoes, I'm good with it.
Thanks for a perfect 20 syllable poem and for the idea.
John
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2023
Hi. We have one perennial hibiscus plant, about twelve years now that attracts hummingbirds. I find that to be so cool.
I may have to get terracotta bowl or a bird bath placed in my garden in 2024. As long as they don't mess with my tomatoes, I'm good with it.
Thanks for a perfect 20 syllable poem and for the idea.
John
Comment Written 30-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2023
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Thanks so much - they are a lot of fun to watch! :)
Comment from lyenochka
I'm so glad you are providing refuge and water in your garden for the birds. Good use of every syllable in your rhyming quatrain. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2023
I'm so glad you are providing refuge and water in your garden for the birds. Good use of every syllable in your rhyming quatrain. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 30-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2023
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Thank you so much! :)
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
you did a good job with this competition entry. All syllables are present and correct which is always nice!
I'm a big fan of observational poetry. It's very relatable. Nice form here, good solid rhymes as well.
Best of luck to you
GMG
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2023
Hi there,
you did a good job with this competition entry. All syllables are present and correct which is always nice!
I'm a big fan of observational poetry. It's very relatable. Nice form here, good solid rhymes as well.
Best of luck to you
GMG
Comment Written 30-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2023
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Much appreciated - thank you! :)
Comment from Wendy G
Beautiful. We have some flowering gums which attract rainbow lorikeets, and birds drink and splash in Sunny's outdoor wate bowl. Birds are a constant source of delight and pleasure as you have captured very well in your twenty syllable well-rhymed poem. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
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reply by the author on 30-Dec-2023
Beautiful. We have some flowering gums which attract rainbow lorikeets, and birds drink and splash in Sunny's outdoor wate bowl. Birds are a constant source of delight and pleasure as you have captured very well in your twenty syllable well-rhymed poem. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
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Comment Written 30-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2023
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Thank you so much, Wendy! :)
Comment from AnnieGale
Very sweet and simply to the point. I love watching the birds and love to feed them too. They are a delight to watch for hours at a time. Your photo is beautiful also. Thank you so much.
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reply by the author on 30-Dec-2023
Very sweet and simply to the point. I love watching the birds and love to feed them too. They are a delight to watch for hours at a time. Your photo is beautiful also. Thank you so much.
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Comment Written 30-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2023
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Thank you! :)