Dancing under the moon
A night with the one you love.37 total reviews
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
"You say you love me but I love you most" - I used to say this to my husband, then him to me, back and forth we'd go.
Very romantic, Willie, and we all need a little romance in our lives.
I like the picture you've used - it says "we've got the world at our feet!" My only suggestion would be to get rid of some of the extra space below the wording, as there is much more than there is at the top and it would look better from a presentation standpoint.
Thanks for sharing this poem about your "honey".
xo
Pam
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"You say you love me but I love you most" - I used to say this to my husband, then him to me, back and forth we'd go.
Very romantic, Willie, and we all need a little romance in our lives.
I like the picture you've used - it says "we've got the world at our feet!" My only suggestion would be to get rid of some of the extra space below the wording, as there is much more than there is at the top and it would look better from a presentation standpoint.
Thanks for sharing this poem about your "honey".
xo
Pam
Comment Written 14-Apr-2024
Comment from nomi338
I can remember dancing close to the honey of my dreams, battling to not get so excited that she would be able to tell just how excited. Trying to remember the steps and trying to keep my excitement at bay. A real exciting time. Whew!
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I can remember dancing close to the honey of my dreams, battling to not get so excited that she would be able to tell just how excited. Trying to remember the steps and trying to keep my excitement at bay. A real exciting time. Whew!
Comment Written 13-Apr-2024
Comment from kiwisteveh
Fact check: Was it a big band or was it a DJ?
I like this. The short rhyming stanzas race down the page and there is a joyful feel to the description of the romantic dance.
nice work.
Steve
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2024
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Fact check: Was it a big band or was it a DJ?
I like this. The short rhyming stanzas race down the page and there is a joyful feel to the description of the romantic dance.
nice work.
Steve
Comment Written 13-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2024
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A big band played by a DJ. Thanks for checking it out.
Comment from Boogienights
I can't imagine anything more romantic. Beautifully told in this wonderfully rhyming poem, l think those days are long past. I sometimes wish l could have lived in the days when romance was alive.
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I can't imagine anything more romantic. Beautifully told in this wonderfully rhyming poem, l think those days are long past. I sometimes wish l could have lived in the days when romance was alive.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2024
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Another romantic one, Willie! Again, you've skilfully captured the scene in the image and infused your rhyming verse with musical lyrics that charm and immerse the reader. Well done on this excellent post! Take care Debbie
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Another romantic one, Willie! Again, you've skilfully captured the scene in the image and infused your rhyming verse with musical lyrics that charm and immerse the reader. Well done on this excellent post! Take care Debbie
Comment Written 13-Apr-2024
Comment from royowen
You must be feeling very romantic Jesse, to write a couple of poems all about the sort of love we all really need to have experienced in our lives, I've still got that love in my life Jesse, well done, blessings Roy
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You must be feeling very romantic Jesse, to write a couple of poems all about the sort of love we all really need to have experienced in our lives, I've still got that love in my life Jesse, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 13-Apr-2024
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
That's sounds like a wonderful romantic night of dancing. It reminds me of the joy my parents used to express of their days out together. Frank Sinatra is a favorite of mine also.
Best wishes and keep your memories close,
Alex
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That's sounds like a wonderful romantic night of dancing. It reminds me of the joy my parents used to express of their days out together. Frank Sinatra is a favorite of mine also.
Best wishes and keep your memories close,
Alex
Comment Written 13-Apr-2024
Comment from Sally Law
I'm spoiled now reading your magnificent love poetry. You're a gift to the site. A virtual six for this beautiful thing.
Sending you my best today as always.
Sally xoxo
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I'm spoiled now reading your magnificent love poetry. You're a gift to the site. A virtual six for this beautiful thing.
Sending you my best today as always.
Sally xoxo
Comment Written 13-Apr-2024
Comment from Ulla
No it's hard to beat this one, but I have one to match you. I spent a beautiful night dancing to 'Raindrops falling on your head.' those were the days thanks for sharing you wonderful poem with us. Ulla;)))
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No it's hard to beat this one, but I have one to match you. I spent a beautiful night dancing to 'Raindrops falling on your head.' those were the days thanks for sharing you wonderful poem with us. Ulla;)))
Comment Written 13-Apr-2024
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Who says romance is dead? This poem definitely proves otherwise. the artwork adds to the presentation. Don't forget to credit where you got the artwork from. Thank you for sharing this lovely piece.
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Who says romance is dead? This poem definitely proves otherwise. the artwork adds to the presentation. Don't forget to credit where you got the artwork from. Thank you for sharing this lovely piece.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2024
