Spectre
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "The Bump"This is book two of a trilogy book 1 "Ghost"
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Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Yes, a good, promising period, perhaps, in which we can, at least, take a little breather, whilst, all the time, aware that your stability could be overturned in an instant, especially if there's no money coming in. I'm wondering who the baddies might now be. Thanks for sharing, Lea. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2023
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Yes, a good, promising period, perhaps, in which we can, at least, take a little breather, whilst, all the time, aware that your stability could be overturned in an instant, especially if there's no money coming in. I'm wondering who the baddies might now be. Thanks for sharing, Lea. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 29-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2023
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Sorry, Debbie, I'm a little bit behind. I was away for the weekend still. I still wanted to definitely say thank you again for your marvelous review and your fine ratings. When I wish you great tonight!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
It is hard not paying your way and sponging off others, but as long as you give this kind lady some money for your keep then you should be in the clear with the husband. And why not have some fun too. You are young and living in an adult world and you had no time to be a carefree child with no worries. You were robbed of your childhood and you should at least have fun as a teenager, another fine chapter Lea, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2023
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It is hard not paying your way and sponging off others, but as long as you give this kind lady some money for your keep then you should be in the clear with the husband. And why not have some fun too. You are young and living in an adult world and you had no time to be a carefree child with no worries. You were robbed of your childhood and you should at least have fun as a teenager, another fine chapter Lea, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2023
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Thank you Dolly. I would appreciate you. Call me in having a reading offering me your thoughts. Great. Appreciate your rating and your fine review too I hope that your day is magnificent!
Comment from BethShelby
I hate to hear there are bumps ahead. The young guy seemed pretty nice. I hope he isn't one of the bumps. It is too bad the man of he house isn't happy about having a guest around. It sounds like his wife isn't letting him make all the decisions. I like your nature poetry.
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reply by the author on 04-Dec-2023
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I hate to hear there are bumps ahead. The young guy seemed pretty nice. I hope he isn't one of the bumps. It is too bad the man of he house isn't happy about having a guest around. It sounds like his wife isn't letting him make all the decisions. I like your nature poetry.
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Comment Written 29-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2023
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Thank you glad you like it! Thanks so much for reading as always. I appreciate your comments and your review and your fine writing too. Hope you have the best day Beth!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I am enjoying the story line.
For the next few days, (For the following few days)
"Joo hear?" She asked. (she asked.)
I haven't more to give you." I said, (you,")
smiles." (omit quotation marks here.)
"She laughed,"Jess cheap." ("She laughed, "Jess cheap." )
Okay you stay, talk later." ("Okay)
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reply by the author on 04-Dec-2023
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I am enjoying the story line.
For the next few days, (For the following few days)
"Joo hear?" She asked. (she asked.)
I haven't more to give you." I said, (you,")
smiles." (omit quotation marks here.)
"She laughed,"Jess cheap." ("She laughed, "Jess cheap." )
Okay you stay, talk later." ("Okay)
Done noting dialogue in this)
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Comment Written 29-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2023
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Thank you, Barbara so much appreciate you. I fear ratings and your kind comment and your suggestions for edit always valuable. Thanks again I hope you have a great day!