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Buttercup Summer

5-7-5 Poem

26 total reviews 
Comment from Wendyanne
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I love seeing fields of buttercups and your little poem made me yearn for warm Summer days instead of the coldness of Winter. "My heart brims with golden dreams". Beautiful. Good luck.

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2023
    Thank you!

    We are right at the start of summer here and the rural roads seem to have bright yellow carpets either side, stretching as far as the eye can see. I know they are weeds and I don't like that they're starting to pop up in my lawn as well, but heck they are beautiful and certain to raise the spirits.

    Steve
Comment from Allezw2
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Well, it seems like a rather abrupt ending to some well-chosen words, redolent of a charming interlude!

Here, in Californy, we wait for the poppy blooms that splash their orange presence across the foothills along the 05 Interstate north of LA.

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2023
    Many thanks.

    We are right at the start of summer here and the rural roads seem to have bright yellow carpets either side, stretching as far as the eye can see. I know they are weeds and I don't like that they're starting to pop up in my lawn as well, but heck they are beautiful and certain to raise the spirits.

    Steve
Comment from lyenochka
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Ah, I guess summer is drawing nigh over there. I like the haiku-like feeling of your 5-7-5 and there is something very cheering about the buttercup which unfortunately likes to take over like the dandelion.
Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2023
    Thank you!

    We are right at the start of summer here and the rural roads seem to have bright yellow carpets either side, stretching as far as the eye can see. I know they are weeds and I don't like that they're starting to pop up in my lawn as well, but heck they are beautiful and certain to raise the spirits.

    Steve
reply by lyenochka on 01-Dec-2023
    I can imagine. I do love their glossy petals and have pressed them for cards.
Comment from dragonpoet
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Hi Steve,
What a beautiful picture to go with the words of a great feeling to have every warm day. Though on some days you might interchange types of flowers depending and the time of season.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Enjoy the rest of your week.
Joan

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2023
    Thanks, Joan.

    We are right at the start of summer here and the rural roads seem to have bright yellow carpets either side, stretching as far as the eye can see. I know they are weeds and I don't like that they're starting to pop up in my lawn as well, but heck they are beautiful and certain to raise the spirits.

    Steve
reply by dragonpoet on 01-Dec-2023
    Any time,
    Steve.
    Joan
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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Oh bring back summer! That looks amazing. You've transported me back to this glorious season rich in colour and warmth! Very nicely done and perfectly fitting the brief. Well done and good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2023
    Many thanks, Debbie, and congratulations on your contest win.

    We are right at the start of summer here and the rural roads seem to have bright yellow carpets either side, stretching as far as the eye can see. I know they are weeds and I don't like that they're starting to pop up in my lawn as well, but heck they are beautiful and certain to raise the spirits.

    Steve
Comment from Daylily
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We are on the cusp of winter here in the midsouth USA. Your lovely three-line contest entry is an uplift bringing back some remembered visions of summer beauty. I enjoyed the encounter very much.

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2023
    Thank you!

    We are right at the start of summer here and the rural roads seem to have bright yellow carpets either side, stretching as far as the eye can see. I know they are weeds and I don't like that they're starting to pop up in my lawn as well, but heck they are beautiful and certain to raise the spirits.

    Steve
Comment from Ginda Simpson
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This is such a delightful poem to read. Your words make us see and feel the joy of a sun-filled, carefree day. I love how you describe it as "buttercup" summer.

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2023
    Ginda, many thanks for the kind words and the lovely sixth star.

    We are right at the start of summer here and the rural roads seem to have bright yellow carpets either side, stretching as far as the eye can see. I know they are weeds and I don't like that they're starting to pop up in my lawn as well, but heck they are beautiful and certain to raise the spirits.

    Steve
Comment from Lisasview
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Such a lovely heartfelt poem in only 3 lines for the 3 line poetry contest!
I wish you the very best of luck.
Love the words, colour and font you chose,
Lisa

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2023
    Thanks, Lisa.

    We are right at the start of summer here and the rural roads seem to have bright yellow carpets either side, stretching as far as the eye can see. I know they are weeds and I don't like that they're starting to pop up in my lawn as well, but heck they are beautiful and certain to raise the spirits.

    Steve
reply by Lisasview on 02-Dec-2023
    Weeds can be quite beautiful... many have flowers...
    Your are so welcome,
    Lisa
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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We're just within the next month ready to start winter. But we're you're at the summer is getting close. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading and want to wish you the best of luck.

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2023
    Thanks, Barbara.

    We are right at the start of summer here and the rural roads seem to have bright yellow carpets either side, stretching as far as the eye can see. I know they are weeds and I don't like that they're starting to pop up in my lawn as well, but heck they are beautiful and certain to raise the spirits.

    Steve
Comment from rjuselius
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This is a beautiful piece of poetry dear Steve! I love the last line. It is delicious. And sweet.
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings with hugs!
Rebekka x

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2023
    Many thanks, Rebekka, for the kind words and the lovely sixth star.

    We are right at the start of summer here and the rural roads seem to have bright yellow carpets either side, stretching as far as the eye can see. I know they are weeds and I don't like that they're starting to pop up in my lawn as well, but heck they are beautiful and certain to raise the spirits.

    Steve