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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I wish you luck with the next step in your story Lea and we are all waiting to see what happened next.
Just a couple of suggestions for these lines for you Lea:
A story of three young, (anonymous) girls. A story of children who had been part of the masses of children who slipped under the radar (and) then some.
Love Dolly x x. x
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2023
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I wish you luck with the next step in your story Lea and we are all waiting to see what happened next.
Just a couple of suggestions for these lines for you Lea:
A story of three young, (anonymous) girls. A story of children who had been part of the masses of children who slipped under the radar (and) then some.
Love Dolly x x. x
Comment Written 17-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2023
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Once again, another amazing review of which I am grateful for and you're fine suggestions. Keep them coming. You're absolutely gold to me and you are very very talented writer! I hope you are joining the sun where you are and that you are well and happy Thanks again for your fine review hope you having a good time there!
Comment from lancellot
Hmm, I'm guessing the one who didn't grow up, or out of the past is the one telling this story.
notes:
A story of children who had been part of the masses of children who slipped under the radar {ans} then some.
-and
gratitude that I do not have to go back{ there"}
-there."
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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2023
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Hmm, I'm guessing the one who didn't grow up, or out of the past is the one telling this story.
notes:
A story of children who had been part of the masses of children who slipped under the radar {ans} then some.
-and
gratitude that I do not have to go back{ there"}
-there."
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Comment Written 17-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2023
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Hey, thank you so much for spying those edit. I feel much appreciate those those are like gold to me. I don't appreciate having them in though. I appreciate you having a read and offering your kind thoughts and your wonderful review. And you're great rating, thank you again. Thank you so much. I hope you have a great evening!
Comment from Chuck Keller
I look forward to seeing "the rest of the story."
Even though it's painful for you to share, it hopefully has some therapeutic affect and makes going forward with your life a little easier.
Let the healing begin.
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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2023
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I look forward to seeing "the rest of the story."
Even though it's painful for you to share, it hopefully has some therapeutic affect and makes going forward with your life a little easier.
Let the healing begin.
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Comment Written 17-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2023
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Yes, let the healing begin exactly my head feels lighter. That's for sure a couple more chunks to get rid of and I think I could move a bus in there that run frame cell that I got kick in around and just move over a little bit lol. Thank you so much. I appreciate you so very much. I know I said it. I'll say it some more and some more and more LO l,
Are you ready for a truly rude joke?
What do a walrus and tupperware have in common?
They both like a tight seal. LLO LOL so bad I couldn't help myself. Have a great night and thank you again my friend!
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