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Comment from BethShelby
I enjoyed this entry for the no rules poetry contest. In the end when it came right down to it, what you had remaining was the most important thing of all. Without God, where would we be. I hope this wins.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023
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I enjoyed this entry for the no rules poetry contest. In the end when it came right down to it, what you had remaining was the most important thing of all. Without God, where would we be. I hope this wins.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023
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I appreciate great review and kind well wishes, Beth.
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is excellent work. It's a good concept about which to write. Your presentation is very good. You use expressive words and colorful imagery that will draw in readers. I enjoyed reviewing this.
Best wishes,
Alex
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023
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This is excellent work. It's a good concept about which to write. Your presentation is very good. You use expressive words and colorful imagery that will draw in readers. I enjoyed reviewing this.
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 16-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023
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Thank you so much, Alex. I appreciate your excellent review.
Comment from Lisa Cuff
What a brave submission. This is such a down to earth poem. What I mean by that is the language is not flowery and fancy, but used in a way that is not predictable and without the feeling you used any words to make the rhyme. They have meaning.
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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023
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What a brave submission. This is such a down to earth poem. What I mean by that is the language is not flowery and fancy, but used in a way that is not predictable and without the feeling you used any words to make the rhyme. They have meaning.
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Comment Written 16-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023
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Thank you very much for an excellent review.
Comment from Richard Montfort Cary
You have such an easy way with words and thoughts and a rich feeling rises from your pen. A pleasure to read and grasp and appreciate. Wishing you a win!
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023
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You have such an easy way with words and thoughts and a rich feeling rises from your pen. A pleasure to read and grasp and appreciate. Wishing you a win!
Comment Written 16-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023
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Thank you very much, Richard. You are always an encourager.
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:>)
Comment from royowen
I think you and have our stocks in the right place, God, and then family, they mean everything for me. Of course it was God that brought everything else into perspective. This is beautifully written Verna, a superb poem my friend, b
Blessings, Roy
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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023
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I think you and have our stocks in the right place, God, and then family, they mean everything for me. Of course it was God that brought everything else into perspective. This is beautifully written Verna, a superb poem my friend, b
Blessings, Roy
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Comment Written 16-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023
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Thank you very much, dear friend.
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Welcome Verna