The Pomeranian and a Beagle
Find love in the unique places26 total reviews
Comment from jim vecchio
It's funny the effect females have on you. After meeting the one who became my wife, I proposed on the second date! I don't care if it was "The Great Gatsby" I was writing-I'd have forgotten all about it, too!
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023
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It's funny the effect females have on you. After meeting the one who became my wife, I proposed on the second date! I don't care if it was "The Great Gatsby" I was writing-I'd have forgotten all about it, too!
Comment Written 14-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023
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Ahhh. Great review, Jim.
Many thanks my friend.
John
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Every time I see that "stout", I wonder if you're looking at me through a scope!
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Are you a stout drinker? I?m a Guinness guy and Murphies Stout?
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Since the 80's I stopped drinking, but I drank enough to last more than my lifetime. Especially in Ireland, where I travelled in the 70s. Guines off the tap there was so much better than the bottled Guiness here.
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Nice , cute, and competition! This is a good little ditty. It is easy to picture, and the photo backs up your story. It is getting colder here. In the low sixties. How about there? Good Writing. karen
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023
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Nice , cute, and competition! This is a good little ditty. It is easy to picture, and the photo backs up your story. It is getting colder here. In the low sixties. How about there? Good Writing. karen
Comment Written 14-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023
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We had 23 degrees yesterday morning, here in NJ. Where are you?
Thanks for reading.
John
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Houston, Texas 64% right now
Comment from Navada
A true case of life imitating art! So many interesting stories are spawned by public transport and chance meetings. I liked the structure of this piece and I'm sure many of your readers will relate to scrawling notes on napkins in transit. :)
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023
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A true case of life imitating art! So many interesting stories are spawned by public transport and chance meetings. I liked the structure of this piece and I'm sure many of your readers will relate to scrawling notes on napkins in transit. :)
Comment Written 14-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023
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I?m sure many have. Thank you very much.
John
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is romantic and endearing John and an ideal post for the contest, I loved your musings here, this is such a special post, very touching and inventive, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023
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This is romantic and endearing John and an ideal post for the contest, I loved your musings here, this is such a special post, very touching and inventive, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 14-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023
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Wow oh wow! Thank you, Dolly for this fantastic review. Your words are so complimentary! Coupled with six stars as the icing on the cake!
Thank you once more!
John
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Well deserved John x
Comment from lyenochka
Lol! Well, this writer is easily distracted! I guess he will need more napkins to write about a brunette in a fedora and her Pomeranian now. If only he had written it all in a document and then he could just use a global change and keep the story! Fun writer's story! Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023
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Lol! Well, this writer is easily distracted! I guess he will need more napkins to write about a brunette in a fedora and her Pomeranian now. If only he had written it all in a document and then he could just use a global change and keep the story! Fun writer's story! Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 14-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023
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Thank you, Helen for the great review. I appreciate your stopping by.
John
Comment from John Ciarmello
Hey John!
I hope you married this brunette passenger because I wanted to hear this story, John. Lol.
This is a great 75-word piece for the contest. I wish you much success.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023
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Hey John!
I hope you married this brunette passenger because I wanted to hear this story, John. Lol.
This is a great 75-word piece for the contest. I wish you much success.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023
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No, just fiction, John.
I met my wife the old traditional way? college.
Thank you for reading.
Much appreciated.
John
Comment from Tom Horonzy
What can be said about a seventy-five word story. idk but I do remember my days as a Trentonian, and riding the PRR to NYC to take the Staten Is Ferry to the Statue of Liberty, Penn Station, the polo Grounds and Ebbets Field, where Carl Furillo tossed me a ball. I was also carried to first base pre-game by Ted. Klu who played ball with my dad in the minor leagues.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023
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What can be said about a seventy-five word story. idk but I do remember my days as a Trentonian, and riding the PRR to NYC to take the Staten Is Ferry to the Statue of Liberty, Penn Station, the polo Grounds and Ebbets Field, where Carl Furillo tossed me a ball. I was also carried to first base pre-game by Ted. Klu who played ball with my dad in the minor leagues.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023
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Thanks, Tom. Always good to hear your stories from when you were a Jersey Boy.
John
Comment from Rachelle Allen
He should have waited around for the redhead with her four-month-old Mini Bernadoodle named Li'l Swish!!
HAAA!
This was very, very cute. Fickle men are not an anomaly!!
Good luck with this cute tale at the polls.
xo
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023
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He should have waited around for the redhead with her four-month-old Mini Bernadoodle named Li'l Swish!!
HAAA!
This was very, very cute. Fickle men are not an anomaly!!
Good luck with this cute tale at the polls.
xo
Comment Written 13-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023
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Aha? I?m guessing you were the proud owner of Li?l Swish and owned a Fedora?
Thank you so much for reading and sharing, Rachelle. I appreciate your time.
John
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Nothing gets by you!! xo
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
That's funny. Penn Station used to be my stomping ground, going to and from NYC, from Long Island. This is excellent work. Your presentation is very good. You use expressive words and colorful imagery that readers enjoy, as I did. This is fiction but it's been close to the truth in my life.
Best wishes,
Alex
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023
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That's funny. Penn Station used to be my stomping ground, going to and from NYC, from Long Island. This is excellent work. Your presentation is very good. You use expressive words and colorful imagery that readers enjoy, as I did. This is fiction but it's been close to the truth in my life.
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 13-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023
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Did you own a beagle or Pomeranian? Haha. Just kidding.
Thank you for reading and sharing. Always appreciate your time.
John
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Writing a love story in napkins during a train ride is romantic and it sounds like a creative writer.
Sometimes I have haiku ideas while I'm in bed and I have to write it down before I forget it.
An unusual love story between a beagle and its owner, in juxtaposition with a pretty brunette and her Pomeranian. It reminds me of "a hundred and one Dalmatians"
Good luck in the contest!
I appreciate your writing talent. Well done!
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023
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Writing a love story in napkins during a train ride is romantic and it sounds like a creative writer.
Sometimes I have haiku ideas while I'm in bed and I have to write it down before I forget it.
An unusual love story between a beagle and its owner, in juxtaposition with a pretty brunette and her Pomeranian. It reminds me of "a hundred and one Dalmatians"
Good luck in the contest!
I appreciate your writing talent. Well done!
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 13-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023
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Thank you, gypsy.
I?m glad you enjoyed this short flash.
John