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Phone Calls from Caroline

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A cousin calls her younger cousin to rant.

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Comment from LJbutterfly
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This is really funny dialogue. I'm sorry for laughing, because I am also sympathetic to older people who have lost track of reality. They often require a lot of patience with everything. I guess it would have been best to ask Caroline what she wanted to do, even though I realize she may not have known. Great story.

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 10-Nov-2023
    Caroline is a bit confused but all her life she has enjoyed giving everyone a hard time. She like everyone to worry about her satisfaction. She's a trip. I'm not young either so I'm trying to make fun of her situation.
Comment from gramalot8
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Lol. I totally relate yo this storyline. I've recently had both my brother and sister in a care center. My sister is doing ok with it but oh boy.. my brother is another story. He says they are treating him like a baby... I explained it's because they have to help him with basic hygiene, etc. He says it's too much if a hassle to ho to the dining room... or to fill out his choices on the monthly menu.. says he'll just eat whatever they bring... and then complains about how he can't get anything he likes and they're trying to kill him or starve him...
Thank goodness he doesn't have to use a stairs contraption! Lol
Thank you for sharing this with us.

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 10-Nov-2023
    Thank you for the excellent review. Older people need something they enjoy doing. Unless they have something, there is too much time to think about things ghey aren't happy about. We have our writing.
    Beth
Comment from damommy
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I hope I was supposed to laughed because I did. Loud and long. I've known people like that, and I suspect she's always been that way. Maybe laying it on a bit thick for attention?

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 09-Nov-2023
    Yes, I was hoping peoople would laugh. You are right about her. She pretty much always been like she is now. She loves attention.
    Thats for the six stars.
    Beth
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I just read this and reviewed it.

The elderly can be difficult to deal with. LOL I am wondering what your cousin decided to do. Could she be carried up the stair or are there too many? Just a small suggestion. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 10-Nov-2023
    Thank you Barbara, I have no idea what she will decide. I guess we'll know after Thanksgiving. She'll have until then to fret about it. I appreciate the review.
    Beth
Comment from Ulla
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Oh dear, this is just too funny Beth, but it's also quite sad really, when we get so old that we don't know what is up or down anymore.
They made me go over there over there, delete one 'over there'
Another why = way so I can eat
I really enjoyed reading this. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 09-Nov-2023
    Thank you Ulla. I'm glad you found it funny. She isn't as confused as she pretends to be. She been a lot like that all her life. Getting old isn't fun, but she likes the attention.
    Beth
Comment from patcelaw
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Sounds to me like an old lady who is having a problem with her cognitive skills. I enjoyed listening to it very much and I got a chuckle from several lines. Have a good day. May God bless.
Patricia

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 09-Nov-2023
    Thank you Pat. I'm glad you got a chichle. I really appreciate the six stars.
    Beth
Comment from JSD
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I love these. And they are funnier because they're true. Excellent dialogue, beautifully written down. Sometimes the old can be so cutting can't they. Thanks for sharing this entertaining piece. x

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 09-Nov-2023
    Thnak for the great review. I'm glad you like the humor and dialogue/
    Beth
Comment from royowen
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One can't help but be exasperated by old people who are impossible to talk with Beth, most imaginative post, she put them up and you kept knocking them down, but once something is stuck in the mind of set ideas, there's no reasoning, with them, terrific post Berh. Well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 09-Nov-2023
    Thank you Roy. Getting older isn't fun but sometimes you've got to laugh about it an go on.
    Beth
reply by royowen on 09-Nov-2023
    That?s true
Comment from Wendy G
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Lol. It's a worry. The whole business of getting old is quite scary. A fine chapter and it sounds like it is based on lived experience. Well done.
Wendy

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 09-Nov-2023
    Thank you Wendy. Sometime the phone calls are about things that crack me up but I try to calm her down. It doesn't always work. I'm old myself but so far I coping with it.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
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Hi Beth! I love your phone call stories. I can just imagine the conversation as you've described it. Your poor elderly cousin! I have to agree on the stair lift. Looks scary, lol. Beats the alternative!

Hugs,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 09-Nov-2023
    Thank you Rhonda. I appreciate the reveiw and comments. I guess those things take some getting used to. Her phone calls are funny. I try to help her but once she makes up her mind it is hard to change it.
reply by davisr (Rhonda) on 09-Nov-2023
    I?ll bet. My mother was a bit that way herself. It was sad, but funny at the same time!