Soul-Searching
Where you hope to end up requires deep thought.34 total reviews
Comment from June Sargent
Words of wisdom here! Thinking before we act can save us a lot of trouble trying to fix mistakes in life. We don't always have the chance for a do over. That's especially true of our words said in anger.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2023
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Words of wisdom here! Thinking before we act can save us a lot of trouble trying to fix mistakes in life. We don't always have the chance for a do over. That's especially true of our words said in anger.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2023
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Thank you June, I appreciate your review and comments.
Beth
Comment from Spitfire
This should do well in the contest, Beth, with it's thought provoking content and use of alliteration in the second line. A perfect picture to accompany this.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2023
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This should do well in the contest, Beth, with it's thought provoking content and use of alliteration in the second line. A perfect picture to accompany this.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2023
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Thank you for the review and comments. I don't know how it will fare in the contest.,but I like the challenge and something to make me keep writing.
Comment from patcelaw
I like this, sir very simple six word poem, that you have written it is a profound thought. Your presentation is beautiful and I wish you the very best of everything in the contest. Patricia
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2023
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I like this, sir very simple six word poem, that you have written it is a profound thought. Your presentation is beautiful and I wish you the very best of everything in the contest. Patricia
Comment Written 05-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2023
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Thank you Patricia. I'm glad you like my simple six word poem. I appreciate the review.
Beth
Comment from Daylily
That signpost picture is accenting some very sound words contained in the two line rhyming message. Excellent alliteration, as well. I wish you well in the contest!
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2023
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That signpost picture is accenting some very sound words contained in the two line rhyming message. Excellent alliteration, as well. I wish you well in the contest!
Comment Written 05-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2023
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Thank you for a great review. I'm glad you liked.
Beth
Comment from nancy_e_davis
This is so true, Beth. We need to do a lot of soul searching before we make any decision. There's always those who try to influence us to do it their way. Well said. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2023
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This is so true, Beth. We need to do a lot of soul searching before we make any decision. There's always those who try to influence us to do it their way. Well said. Nancy:)
Comment Written 05-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2023
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Thank you Nancy. Sometimes we need to rely on our own research, prayer and the strenth that lies within us rather than to go to others for advice and never make decision based on emotion.
Comment from Brett Matthew West
So true. Need to look inside one's self most of the time to figure out exactly where they wish to end up, and not rely on outside influences to make that decision, which easily could lead them to where they do not wish to be.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2023
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So true. Need to look inside one's self most of the time to figure out exactly where they wish to end up, and not rely on outside influences to make that decision, which easily could lead them to where they do not wish to be.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2023
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Thank you Brett. Young people, especially, often make big decision based on emotions and they aren't very trustworthy.
Comment from Navada
Wow! This is a fabulous and sophisticated presentation of an idea in just six words. The accompanying image is so perfect as a further means of encouraging the reader to reflect. Thanks for the share and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2023
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Wow! This is a fabulous and sophisticated presentation of an idea in just six words. The accompanying image is so perfect as a further means of encouraging the reader to reflect. Thanks for the share and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2023
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Thank you Navada. I really appreciate your reading my six word poem and making excellent comments.
Beth
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I think you have a very good chance in the contest. It's great to read such a short piece that evokes such depth.
Comment from Ric Myworld
You've certainly said a whole lot in six words. I think maybe I need to work on my decisions. LOL. Thanks for sharing another fine post. ..................................
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2023
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You've certainly said a whole lot in six words. I think maybe I need to work on my decisions. LOL. Thanks for sharing another fine post. ..................................
Comment Written 04-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2023
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Thank you Ric. I think i should be putting more thought into mine as well.
Beth
Comment from Wendy G
That is a very clever and thought-provoking few words. Succinct and memorable. The presentation is excellent with a well chosen image. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2023
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That is a very clever and thought-provoking few words. Succinct and memorable. The presentation is excellent with a well chosen image. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 04-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2023
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Thank you Wendy. I appreciate the review and nice comments.
Beth
Comment from Ben Colder
Makes sense to me. Plenty of signs out there pointing to the wrong way. Glad we have the Bible to teach us where to go. Thanks, Beth. Good one.
Blessings to you.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2023
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Makes sense to me. Plenty of signs out there pointing to the wrong way. Glad we have the Bible to teach us where to go. Thanks, Beth. Good one.
Blessings to you.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2023
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Thank you for the nice review. I'm looking forward to checking you your new book.
Beth