Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

COLD wind? where?? LOL!

i like the image of wind meandering
and whistling through trees and leaves -
great tanka with smooth flow of words

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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Comment from Debra White

Exceptional

Hello Gypsy :)
I love your cinquain. It brings the senses to life and that autumn forest is easy to visualise and hear. Lovely personification of the wind and its casually meandering. I love the presentation too.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes, Debra

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023

Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words.

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Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

A beautiful poem. Autumn being one of my favorite times is painted in beautiful rich and warm colors most of the time. Yet you choose music to describe it. Beautifully written and very original. Gretchen

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I loved the "playing the forest symphony" and yes there is a music to each season and you captured the autumn song in this poem. Great way to present with the varied fonts!

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Oct-2023

Thank you, big sister.

Love

Marival

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

With this poem you've shared a beautiful description of autumn. Sure, would be nice if we didn't go back into the 90's again. Maybe we might someday actually have an autumn. Naw, this is Texas. Wonderful presentation.

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 Comment Written 24-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Oct-2023

It's usually pretty warm in southern California but we do get autumn and winter. Autumn is such a pretty season.
Barbara,
Thank you very much for the lovely review and kind words.

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Comment from RodG

Excellent

I enjoyed you Autumn Cinquain very much. It is easy to visualize the scene as a cold wind blows through the trees.
Nice sensory imagery as see the bare boughs while feeling and hearing the wind. Rod

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 Comment Written 24-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Oct-2023

Rod,
Thank you very much for the lovely review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs