Autumn Coronary
Who is not affected by Autumn?16 total reviews
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are engaging, descriptive and creative. I liked
the theme of this poem. Now living in Florida I miss the beauty of Autumn! The author's words brought back many memories! The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome and goes well with these words. Great Poem!
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
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The author's words are engaging, descriptive and creative. I liked
the theme of this poem. Now living in Florida I miss the beauty of Autumn! The author's words brought back many memories! The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome and goes well with these words. Great Poem!
Comment Written 10-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
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I can imagine how despondent you might get not being able to enjoy the seasonal changes. I am glad my poem brought back memories. Thank you very much for your kind praise.
Comment from June Sargent
Autumn is a lovely time of year for reflection and relaxation after a hectic summer. I just sit and stare at the colors and breathe in the cooler air. So refreshing!
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2023
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Autumn is a lovely time of year for reflection and relaxation after a hectic summer. I just sit and stare at the colors and breathe in the cooler air. So refreshing!
Comment Written 10-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2023
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Yes, there?s nothing I enjoy more than sitting and staring at Autumn?s colors.
Comment from Douglas Goff
Ah yes, me too!!! I love the fall. So elegant and beautiful and refreshing. Like your poem!
Good job here. Save a seat on that bench for me. Orange is my favorite color.
(PS there are some odd symbols in your description line)
Great piece.
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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2023
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Ah yes, me too!!! I love the fall. So elegant and beautiful and refreshing. Like your poem!
Good job here. Save a seat on that bench for me. Orange is my favorite color.
(PS there are some odd symbols in your description line)
Great piece.
D
Comment Written 10-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2023
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Thank you, Doug, for the high praise of my poem and the heads-up regarding my descriptive line.
Comment from jim vecchio
Your words made me want to share that bench! A beautiful, beckoning Autumn scene! You picked a very attractive illustration to accompany it. A very professional use of those miniscule twenty syllables.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2023
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Your words made me want to share that bench! A beautiful, beckoning Autumn scene! You picked a very attractive illustration to accompany it. A very professional use of those miniscule twenty syllables.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2023
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I am so pleased my poem made you want to sit on that bench, too. Many thanks for sharing, Jim.
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Thank you for your fine writing!
Comment from Lauren Scott
Very thought-provoking, especially, with that beautiful illustration of the colorful fall season. I liked how 'Autumn' is capitalized to personalize it and draw focus and give it those 'extra powers' to 'clench my heart anew'. Brilliant!
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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2023
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Very thought-provoking, especially, with that beautiful illustration of the colorful fall season. I liked how 'Autumn' is capitalized to personalize it and draw focus and give it those 'extra powers' to 'clench my heart anew'. Brilliant!
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Comment Written 10-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2023
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Thank you so much, Lauren, for the lovely praise of my poem.
Comment from JSD
Good use of rhyme to add to your lovely little tribute to autumn. Well done for encapsulating this successfully in a mere twenty syllables. A sweet piece.
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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2023
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Good use of rhyme to add to your lovely little tribute to autumn. Well done for encapsulating this successfully in a mere twenty syllables. A sweet piece.
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Comment Written 10-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much, JSD, for your kind praise of my poem.