The Aspen Grove Murders
Viewing comments for Chapter 42 "The Aspen Grove Murders Finale"A Tommy Thompson Mystery
25 total reviews
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Fee has made an amazing change but seeing an angel bring two people back to life must have stunned him. This is a very exciting ending to a long life of criminal activity.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2023
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Fee has made an amazing change but seeing an angel bring two people back to life must have stunned him. This is a very exciting ending to a long life of criminal activity.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2023
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Thank you, Carol! Sal XOs
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
A brilliantly penned ending, my dear friend. I loved every word of your book and can't wait to get it as an audio book. The ending was totally unexpected, I assure you, but loved the message.
You are so clever, Sally. I appreciate the effort and hours you put into your book.
God bless, hugs,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2023
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A brilliantly penned ending, my dear friend. I loved every word of your book and can't wait to get it as an audio book. The ending was totally unexpected, I assure you, but loved the message.
You are so clever, Sally. I appreciate the effort and hours you put into your book.
God bless, hugs,
Rhonda
Comment Written 04-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2023
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Rhonda dear, Thank you for the wonderful review and gracious stars, my Friend! I'm honored and blessed to have you close. Sending you my best today as always.
Sal XOs
Comment from poetwatch
"To the Epilogue," Sally? What does not mean? Fee is is jail for a couple of lifetimes. Are you going to stretch this book and give it a better ending? It is good. I'm waiting for the end. :) Maybe... nah! I let you tell it.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2023
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"To the Epilogue," Sally? What does not mean? Fee is is jail for a couple of lifetimes. Are you going to stretch this book and give it a better ending? It is good. I'm waiting for the end. :) Maybe... nah! I let you tell it.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2023
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Thank you for tje wonderful review and kind comments, Jose. Both mean so much. Blessings,
Sal, XOs
Comment from lyenochka
Wow! This is the best wrap-up of your mysteries. To have such an evil person like Elling make that transformation is the best we can hope for in this world. And we know God can do the impossible. With his encounter with Sally and witnessing Patience, he has changed completely. Great job!
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2023
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Wow! This is the best wrap-up of your mysteries. To have such an evil person like Elling make that transformation is the best we can hope for in this world. And we know God can do the impossible. With his encounter with Sally and witnessing Patience, he has changed completely. Great job!
Comment Written 04-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2023
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Mr friend, thank you for the wonderful review and glorious stars! One more to go and I'm posting the epilogue tommorow. A work of God's grace in every way. Thank you again for all your help and support.
Love and Blessings,
Sal XOs
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Comment from Carol Clark2
Congratulations on completing your book! Well done! Of course you ended with miracles, thanks to Patience. I'm looking forward to reading the Epilogue.
I'm so sorry your eyesight is diminishing. Sending prayers up for you.
Blessings.
Carol
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2023
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Congratulations on completing your book! Well done! Of course you ended with miracles, thanks to Patience. I'm looking forward to reading the Epilogue.
I'm so sorry your eyesight is diminishing. Sending prayers up for you.
Blessings.
Carol
Comment Written 04-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2023
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Dear Carol,
Thank you for the wonderful review of my book chapter, my friend! The stars are pretty pleasing too. How sweet you are! Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the day. Sal XOs
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I am glad you have reached the end, but I'm sad there won't be any more chapters. I've enjoyed them all.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
"put on YOUR shirt"
Kneeling to check her pulse while the house is in flames doesn't seem right. I would have him just pick her up and haul her out and worry about the pulse outside.
If I had seen Patience breathing life back into people I too would be a changed person! I wanted to feel bad for Fee being sentenced to solitary - that's pretty harsh. But then I considered all his heinous crimes and got over myself quickly.
Sally, this was an outstanding effort on your part. To be able to develop these characters, and consistently write and move a story along like you've done all these months is commendable. I would never be able to focus on one piece for as long as you do, and I would end up writing myself into a corner, lol!
Well done, my friend. I'm so sorry you're having to do this with your eyesight leaving you, but you do it so well and I know you'll find a way to continue.
Thank you so much for a great read.
xoxo
Pam
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2023
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"put on YOUR shirt"
Kneeling to check her pulse while the house is in flames doesn't seem right. I would have him just pick her up and haul her out and worry about the pulse outside.
If I had seen Patience breathing life back into people I too would be a changed person! I wanted to feel bad for Fee being sentenced to solitary - that's pretty harsh. But then I considered all his heinous crimes and got over myself quickly.
Sally, this was an outstanding effort on your part. To be able to develop these characters, and consistently write and move a story along like you've done all these months is commendable. I would never be able to focus on one piece for as long as you do, and I would end up writing myself into a corner, lol!
Well done, my friend. I'm so sorry you're having to do this with your eyesight leaving you, but you do it so well and I know you'll find a way to continue.
Thank you so much for a great read.
xoxo
Pam
Comment Written 04-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2023
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Thank you for the lovely review and kind help, my friend. The stars are pretty pleasing too. How sweet you are! Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the day. Sal XOs
Comment from Ulla
Aw, that was a dramatic ending. I Liked it all, but I was especially attracted to the court romm scene. Probably because I'm a later myself. Now on to the epilogue. This has been one fine story, Sally. Ulla xxx
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2023
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Aw, that was a dramatic ending. I Liked it all, but I was especially attracted to the court romm scene. Probably because I'm a later myself. Now on to the epilogue. This has been one fine story, Sally. Ulla xxx
Comment Written 04-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2023
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Ulla dear, Thank you for the super review of my book chapter, my friend! The stars are pretty pleasing too. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the weekend.
Sal XOs
Comment from eliz100
You have an angel, Sally. This is another excellent chapter. What a change in Ellington, who knew. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2023
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You have an angel, Sally. This is another excellent chapter. What a change in Ellington, who knew. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2023
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Thank you so much, Elizabeth! Sal XOs
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Sally,
I've heard of criminals accepting Christ while imprisoned, but it's rare for a criminal to be so contrite in court. But it does happen.
Your story is nice-Lu paced, and the fire scene had me on edge.
Good luck with this installment and with your whole story. You make law really interesting.
Have a nice week.
Hugs,
Blessings,
Cindy.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2023
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Sally,
I've heard of criminals accepting Christ while imprisoned, but it's rare for a criminal to be so contrite in court. But it does happen.
Your story is nice-Lu paced, and the fire scene had me on edge.
Good luck with this installment and with your whole story. You make law really interesting.
Have a nice week.
Hugs,
Blessings,
Cindy.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2023
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Cindy dear, thank you for the great review and kind and generous stars! I am blessed. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
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You?re welcome, Sally
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Interesting picture. Yours?
Sad to hear your plight with your sight.
Now that your story is complete will you take it to Amazon or what is it you do with a self-written book?
Tom H
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2023
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Interesting picture. Yours?
Sad to hear your plight with your sight.
Now that your story is complete will you take it to Amazon or what is it you do with a self-written book?
Tom H
Comment Written 04-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2023
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Thank you, Tom. The picture is from pixabay.com. I publish with Amazon Books and Amazon Kimdle, 5 total in the crime/fiction genre. I also have three of my books on Audible if you like audiobooks. I'm active in my blind community and hopefully I will have all eight books on Audible one day. It's rather expensive though and time consuming because first the book has to be published in soft cover or Kindle, then I had to find and hire a voice actor and have an audio transcript made for Audible. The process took about about a month (for one book) and it's pricey. Blessings,
Sal
