2023 Gypsy's Tanka
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17 total reviews
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
I absolutely love this poem. It is so beautiful. I love the overall presentation and choice of font colours. It stands out so well. Just magnificent. Photos are amazing. ð???
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023
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I absolutely love this poem. It is so beautiful. I love the overall presentation and choice of font colours. It stands out so well. Just magnificent. Photos are amazing. ð???
Comment Written 25-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy
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Your welcome
Comment from GWHARGIS
The use of this particular color blue makes me think of the grand essence of him. It is limitless like the sky. I like that you used the word rare to describe how he is. Someone very special. Beautifully written. Gretchen
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023
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The use of this particular color blue makes me think of the grand essence of him. It is limitless like the sky. I like that you used the word rare to describe how he is. Someone very special. Beautifully written. Gretchen
Comment Written 25-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I didn't see your definition for a minute but that is a beautiful word for deep blue and hardly surprising that you wanted to use it in this very spiritual and special theme of paradise. Well done for this very dreamy and pleasing verse! Debbie
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023
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I didn't see your definition for a minute but that is a beautiful word for deep blue and hardly surprising that you wanted to use it in this very spiritual and special theme of paradise. Well done for this very dreamy and pleasing verse! Debbie
Comment Written 25-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Definitely you are the sense of haiku, starting with the choice of your background and finishing in an sensorial explosion. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023
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Definitely you are the sense of haiku, starting with the choice of your background and finishing in an sensorial explosion. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy
Comment from royowen
I love your choice of colours Gypsy, cerulean is a colour name frequently used, I know it's blue, but not sure of its shade, people refer to the sky, but depending on the time of year, it can range from light to dark azure blue. You've got it at dark blue, A beautifully written Tanka Gypsy, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023
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I love your choice of colours Gypsy, cerulean is a colour name frequently used, I know it's blue, but not sure of its shade, people refer to the sky, but depending on the time of year, it can range from light to dark azure blue. You've got it at dark blue, A beautifully written Tanka Gypsy, blessings Roy
Comment Written 25-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy
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Welcome
Comment from Douglas Goff
Oh goodness! You are making me look up words. Your mind is like a steel trap. Once one gets in, it is hard to get out!
Luckily it is an imaginative creative wonderful place of serenity.
Thank you for your writings!
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reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023
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Oh goodness! You are making me look up words. Your mind is like a steel trap. Once one gets in, it is hard to get out!
Luckily it is an imaginative creative wonderful place of serenity.
Thank you for your writings!
D
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Comment Written 25-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy
Comment from JSD
Phew! Thanks for the note! I was about to look it up. This is another lovely little shard of writing. Sharp and clear and precise. I wonder if his eyes are blue?
John
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reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023
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Phew! Thanks for the note! I was about to look it up. This is another lovely little shard of writing. Sharp and clear and precise. I wonder if his eyes are blue?
John
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Comment Written 25-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023
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No i haventseen it yet. Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy
