Artificial Intelligence
Viewing comments for Chapter 29 "Unplugged part I"A critique of technology
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Comment from Jesse James Doty
Yes, yes, yes! You've got me thinking about how the technology of the world drives us ever underground. I want to go where the birds sing and the streams flow ever quietly with no one around me but Mother Nature!
We owe it to ourselves to let go of all this technology!
Jesse
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2023
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Yes, yes, yes! You've got me thinking about how the technology of the world drives us ever underground. I want to go where the birds sing and the streams flow ever quietly with no one around me but Mother Nature!
We owe it to ourselves to let go of all this technology!
Jesse
Comment Written 23-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2023
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Thanks again for the exceptional review estory
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You are welcome, my friend.
Jesse
Comment from RodG
Your message in your Notes really comes across in your poem: We weren't designed to interact with machines. Machines are lifeless, soulless creations and they are building a lifeless, soulless world around us.
I especially like your imagery in stanzas 1 & 2. You seem more "connected" to all this than I am, but we both have the same solution: communing with Nature.
Rod
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2023
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Your message in your Notes really comes across in your poem: We weren't designed to interact with machines. Machines are lifeless, soulless creations and they are building a lifeless, soulless world around us.
I especially like your imagery in stanzas 1 & 2. You seem more "connected" to all this than I am, but we both have the same solution: communing with Nature.
Rod
Comment Written 23-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2023
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Thanks for the excellent review and your comments supporting the theme of my poem. Bring back the paper newspapers. The book clubs. Soon we aren't going to have cashiers and bank tellers and clerks in the stores, or waitresses. Or truck drivers. People need to realize the job they save could be their own. And who wants to just spend life clicking buttons on computer screens? estory
Comment from JSD
An excellent moral, with which few can disagree, and you give perfect voice to your ideas in this clever poem. Although of course I'm writing this on my iPhone 14 Pro.
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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2023
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An excellent moral, with which few can disagree, and you give perfect voice to your ideas in this clever poem. Although of course I'm writing this on my iPhone 14 Pro.
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Comment Written 23-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2023
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Thanks for the excellent review and your support for my strange little poem estory
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I am with you on this one, I wish to step out of my surrogate documentaries about nature and just be there, be part of that sunset, be part of the tide and of the bird's song. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2023
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I am with you on this one, I wish to step out of my surrogate documentaries about nature and just be there, be part of that sunset, be part of the tide and of the bird's song. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
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Comment Written 23-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2023
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Be part of the sunset. I like that one. Thanks for the continued support of my crazy poetry. I am ready to move on from this book to the next one. It took a long time to post because of my dad's illness and subsequent death. estory
