Tales of our Times
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Comment from JSD
Very Downton Abbey. I like the use of the slightly archaic language at times in this. Very convincing. Wonder if it should be 'The Marquis de Lancelot'? It's usually a Marquess of... Otherwise this is most enjoyable. Your characters are convincing and the dialogue authentic. Well done and good luck in the competition.
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Very Downton Abbey. I like the use of the slightly archaic language at times in this. Very convincing. Wonder if it should be 'The Marquis de Lancelot'? It's usually a Marquess of... Otherwise this is most enjoyable. Your characters are convincing and the dialogue authentic. Well done and good luck in the competition.
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Comment Written 21-Aug-2023
