Coffee With Iris
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22 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
I'm happy Jameson is writing again. It sounds like it makes him happy. He just needed a little encouragement.
As always, great job with this chapter. It moves along nicely and grab my interest until the end. I want more. (*÷*)
Gypsy
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2023
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I'm happy Jameson is writing again. It sounds like it makes him happy. He just needed a little encouragement.
As always, great job with this chapter. It moves along nicely and grab my interest until the end. I want more. (*÷*)
Gypsy
Comment Written 17-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2023
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Thanks so much. I'm so glad you enjoyed this. Gretchen
Comment from damommy
Bless her heart. She's arranged everything so Jameson will have time to write and be with his son. What a wonderful friendship they have. I'd like to see his face when he realizes what Iris has done for him.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2023
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Bless her heart. She's arranged everything so Jameson will have time to write and be with his son. What a wonderful friendship they have. I'd like to see his face when he realizes what Iris has done for him.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2023
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He will be embarrassed but grateful. Thanks so much. Gretchen
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
Awwww, this is really poignant. However there's going to be a lot of talk around town once Iris passes away. The elderly ladies are going to have a field day. I wonderhow Jameson will cope? kay
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2023
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Awwww, this is really poignant. However there's going to be a lot of talk around town once Iris passes away. The elderly ladies are going to have a field day. I wonderhow Jameson will cope? kay
Comment Written 17-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2023
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I think he probably won't be traveling in the same circles as the vicious old ladies. LOL. Thsnks so much. Gretchen
Comment from Sankey
This is still a lovely read. So realistic and believable. Almost as if you know a Iris and a Jamison somewhere?? We have no children and family are so distant.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2023
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This is still a lovely read. So realistic and believable. Almost as if you know a Iris and a Jamison somewhere?? We have no children and family are so distant.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2023
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Thank you. I have based this on my Mother and my nephew. He doted on her up until she passed. Was there with her as she took her last breath. I'm indebted to him for being there. Gretchen
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Good to know of the connection in real life.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is such a warm friendship they have. Jamison really doesn't have a clue how well he can write because his wife has spent so much time putting him down. Iris benefits because she has the opportunity to make a man and his son happy and give Jamison the freedom to write.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2023
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This is such a warm friendship they have. Jamison really doesn't have a clue how well he can write because his wife has spent so much time putting him down. Iris benefits because she has the opportunity to make a man and his son happy and give Jamison the freedom to write.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2023
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Thank you, Carol. That is exactly how she wants her estate used. Gretchen
Comment from Jay Squires
Well, this comes as a shock. I didn't know that Iris was so "well heeled", whatever in the heck that means. Again she had to explain that theirs wasn't a December/May relationship. But why shouldn't it be? Absent the sex, their relationship has developed into a lot more than some people go into marriage with. I think they'd make a cute couple!
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2023
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Well, this comes as a shock. I didn't know that Iris was so "well heeled", whatever in the heck that means. Again she had to explain that theirs wasn't a December/May relationship. But why shouldn't it be? Absent the sex, their relationship has developed into a lot more than some people go into marriage with. I think they'd make a cute couple!
Comment Written 16-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2023
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They have a safe relationship. Just enjoy each other. Thank you so much. Gretchen
Comment from pome lover
He certainly will. Lucky him.
I'm glad Iris got that taken care of; I was afraid something was going to happen and she wouldn't. I hope we get to read it, too - Jameson's story, not the will - ha.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2023
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He certainly will. Lucky him.
I'm glad Iris got that taken care of; I was afraid something was going to happen and she wouldn't. I hope we get to read it, too - Jameson's story, not the will - ha.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2023
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Thanks so much. I'm not sure we will get much more than a taste of his ideas for a story. Gretchen
Comment from nancy_e_davis
He will be amazed when he finds how special he was to Iris. She is leaving him her entire estate and he will be able to write to his hearts content. There will be one very co-operative ex-wife in the future. LOL I know this is going to be very entertaining. Good work, Gretchen. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2023
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He will be amazed when he finds how special he was to Iris. She is leaving him her entire estate and he will be able to write to his hearts content. There will be one very co-operative ex-wife in the future. LOL I know this is going to be very entertaining. Good work, Gretchen. Nancy:)
Comment Written 16-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2023
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Thanks, Nancy. As far as Jameson has come, Iris still thinks he'd take Claire back. Therefore she opted to have Mitchell do the dirty work. Lol. Gretchen
Comment from jmdg1954
Yes. Just how special Jameson is to her.
I guess he did not pick up on the line about Heston -
"And bring Heston. I have a big fenced in backyard. Let him get used to playing in the yard."
Let him get used to playing in the yard soon to be yours, once the will is read.
Great chapter. I'm enjoying the story immensely.
John
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2023
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Yes. Just how special Jameson is to her.
I guess he did not pick up on the line about Heston -
"And bring Heston. I have a big fenced in backyard. Let him get used to playing in the yard."
Let him get used to playing in the yard soon to be yours, once the will is read.
Great chapter. I'm enjoying the story immensely.
John
Comment Written 16-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2023
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You are the only one so far to pick up on that. It will click later. Thank you for this. Gretchen
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Iris has certainly put all her trust in this young man and her lawyer is wise to be suspicious. Jameson is painted here as a kind and generous person and I hope Iris is right but she won't be around to find out otherwise anyway. This is a fine story of friendship without any expectations as neither person expects anything from the other except a mutual interest in each other's company. This is a rare and wonderful thing Gretchen, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2023
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Iris has certainly put all her trust in this young man and her lawyer is wise to be suspicious. Jameson is painted here as a kind and generous person and I hope Iris is right but she won't be around to find out otherwise anyway. This is a fine story of friendship without any expectations as neither person expects anything from the other except a mutual interest in each other's company. This is a rare and wonderful thing Gretchen, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 16-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2023
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Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed this. Gretchen
