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The Followup to Chasing the Elusive Dream

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Comment from jim vecchio
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I can identify with Don. Years ago, I worked at a newspaper and we went to Yankee Stadium. At the game's end, I got separated by a crowd from my group. While they searched for me, I took a subway and trin home and got home before anyone. Anyhow, I love this latest chapter and can't wait to see what your family will be up to next.

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 21-Jul-2023
    Thank you Jim, I always pleased with you review and comments. I'm sorry you haven't been well but hanging in there and doing excellent reviews any way. I put my prayers that you heal quickly.
    Beth
reply by jim vecchio on 21-Jul-2023
    Thank you so much!
Comment from royowen
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Isn't that a marvellous thing, and deeply respectful of you and Evan, it wouldn't have done the school's respectability, but many cover up, but that was a fine gesture of putting Don on a plane, a fast exit for him, and a good move for you. Well done, blessings Roy
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 Comment Written 21-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 21-Jul-2023
    Thank you so much.Since the school would be empty for a few days they probably didn't know what they would do with him if they didn't send him home. I was thankful they did. The bus driver wasn't supposed to leave without knowing for sure he had all the kids on his list so he probably got blamed.
reply by royowen on 21-Jul-2023
    That?s true
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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One of my son's changed his schedule too and I didn't find out about it until report cards came out. I was not happy, Jeff was my wild child. I guess every family has to have one. LOL I enjoyed reading.

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 21-Jul-2023
    Thank you Barbara, I had a wild child, An accident prone child, A stubborn child, a jealous child, a procrastanator, a naive child, a devious child, more that one with ADD, and many more all wraped up in just four people. LOL
    I wasnn't happy with the schedule change.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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It's good for kids to get chicken pox when they are young and all the childhood illnesses are out of the way, and when you catch these diseases as an adult they can be very severe. It sounds like you had some wonderful holidays Beth. America is such a vast country and it's easy to be parted from relatives as they venture to different parts. Living in a small country we have no comprehension of its size really.

A suggestion for this line Beth:

Chickenpox didn't seem to bother her that (much).

Much enjoyed, love Dolly x x x

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 Comment Written 21-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 21-Jul-2023
    Thank you Dolly for a great review. America is vast with all sorts of varied countryside and cities. I've never been to England although the majority of my ancestors came from there. I never really thought of it as small but I realize it is. I changed the word. It is better.
    Beth
Comment from Jasmine Girl
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Haha. Connie almost moved in with her friends. She seems very open and out going. We are not country music but the Wharton family did have a family reunion once at Branson. I enjoyed it. We rented a house on the lake and had a lot of fun.

Well done.

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 Comment Written 21-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 21-Jul-2023
    Thank for the great review. Branson has grown a lot since we were theres.
    Beth