Soaring Eagle
Eaglets Will Feast Tonight22 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Love this as eagles are amazing hunters and their eyesight is amazing, their prey does not stand a chance if seen by this magnificent bird, a fine 5-7-5 for the contest, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023
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Love this as eagles are amazing hunters and their eyesight is amazing, their prey does not stand a chance if seen by this magnificent bird, a fine 5-7-5 for the contest, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 18-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023
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Hello Dolly,
As always, you are so generous towards my humble work.
Really appreciate your insight and stars!!!
Comment from Spitfire
Powerful contrast in this with a gold sunset and a majestic bird that kills! Alliteration with gold, glide, and grace. The hard k sound at the end. Good luck in the entry.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023
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Powerful contrast in this with a gold sunset and a majestic bird that kills! Alliteration with gold, glide, and grace. The hard k sound at the end. Good luck in the entry.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023
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Thank you so much for the in-depth review, the generous stars and the good wishes!!!!
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very lovely haiku that you have entered in the contest. I wish you the very best in the contest you have presented it well, and it looks beautiful on the page keep writing, and keep sharing with us. Patricia
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023
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This is a very lovely haiku that you have entered in the contest. I wish you the very best in the contest you have presented it well, and it looks beautiful on the page keep writing, and keep sharing with us. Patricia
Comment Written 18-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023
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Thank you so much Patricia for the kind review, the generous stars and the good wishes!!!!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A very evocative 5-7-5 verse! The image is powerful with your poem skilfully capturing all the potency and majesty of the eagle. Stunning! Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023
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A very evocative 5-7-5 verse! The image is powerful with your poem skilfully capturing all the potency and majesty of the eagle. Stunning! Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 18-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023
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Thank you so much Debbie for the in-depth review, the generous stars and the good wishes!!!!
Comment from tempeste
Ciao poet !
Love the eye-catching artwork you chose.
that is how life goes in the wild .. it's a useful death..it will feed those hungry eaglets.
I have been following on live cam the life of Jackie and Shadow : two bald eagles that live in California. Last year they had one eaglet, Stormy.
It was exciting to watch it grow and to see how dedicated the parents were.
This year Jackie laid two eggs in January but nothing came of them.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023
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Ciao poet !
Love the eye-catching artwork you chose.
that is how life goes in the wild .. it's a useful death..it will feed those hungry eaglets.
I have been following on live cam the life of Jackie and Shadow : two bald eagles that live in California. Last year they had one eaglet, Stormy.
It was exciting to watch it grow and to see how dedicated the parents were.
This year Jackie laid two eggs in January but nothing came of them.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023
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Thanks for the review. I believe I read a narrative about that. Did you write on it?
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Yes , several times 🙂 🦅
Comment from Lisasview
What a lovely 5-7-5......
poem for the contest....
Really enjoyed it ... very nice...
I wish you the best in the upcoming contest....
Lisasview, new to this site.....
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023
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What a lovely 5-7-5......
poem for the contest....
Really enjoyed it ... very nice...
I wish you the best in the upcoming contest....
Lisasview, new to this site.....
Comment Written 18-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023
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Hey, Lisa y fan!!! Not so new now, LOL.. you have written quite a bit of beautiful stuff now!!!
Thanks so much for your kind review!!!
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What a nice thing to say.
My Blind Fan
Lisa
Comment from Pearl Edwards
I love that you show the beauty, the majesty of both the day and the bird, before the bird swoops in for the kill. I e joyed the dramatic finish in your 5-7-5 poem. Good luck in the contest. Cheers
Valda
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023
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I love that you show the beauty, the majesty of both the day and the bird, before the bird swoops in for the kill. I e joyed the dramatic finish in your 5-7-5 poem. Good luck in the contest. Cheers
Valda
Comment Written 18-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023
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Thank you for your in-depth review, Valda...
And what a lovely name!!!
Comment from Douglas Goff
Interesting. That last sentences was quite the punchline. I thought we were going for regal grace and crash, bang, boom, we were in the kill zone.
Nicely done. I enjoyed this peek into your fantastic brain!
D
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2023
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Interesting. That last sentences was quite the punchline. I thought we were going for regal grace and crash, bang, boom, we were in the kill zone.
Nicely done. I enjoyed this peek into your fantastic brain!
D
Comment Written 17-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2023
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Ha ha... thanks for your insightful comment, Douglas!!!
Comment from Barbara H.
The eagle (right?) has always been such a majestic bird. Wonderful topic. Loved the picture you chose. The only thing I would have done differently is to use another word besides languorous. Barbara H.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2023
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The eagle (right?) has always been such a majestic bird. Wonderful topic. Loved the picture you chose. The only thing I would have done differently is to use another word besides languorous. Barbara H.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2023
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Barbara,
You are a fairy, really. You are right about the languorous, I needed to change it, but to what??? Then, like a magic wand, I re-read your comment and found the right word: majestic!!!!
Thank you so much! I just changed it!! You think majestic would be better?
Comment from GWHARGIS
Watching birds as they hunt is like watching ballet. Even knowing they are predators, their movements are so sleek and refined. They move in with careful grace and speed. Your poem was beautiful. Thank you for sharing. Gretchen
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2023
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Watching birds as they hunt is like watching ballet. Even knowing they are predators, their movements are so sleek and refined. They move in with careful grace and speed. Your poem was beautiful. Thank you for sharing. Gretchen
Comment Written 17-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2023
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Thanks so much for your kind review, Gretchen!!!
