The Aspen Grove Murders
Viewing comments for Chapter 35 "The Aspen Grove Murders #35"A Tommy Thompson Mystery
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Comment from Carol Clark2
I like that Sally puts Bertrand Paulette at ease right away with a chocolate bar, and that he trusts her. I also like the vision that Greyson Cole has, as well as his encounter with Patience, who seems to anoint him and asks him to return to the Lord. Great dialogue there. Another interesting chapter. I'm glad so many are being brought to justice. Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2023
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I like that Sally puts Bertrand Paulette at ease right away with a chocolate bar, and that he trusts her. I also like the vision that Greyson Cole has, as well as his encounter with Patience, who seems to anoint him and asks him to return to the Lord. Great dialogue there. Another interesting chapter. I'm glad so many are being brought to justice. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 17-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2023
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Thank you for the wonderful review of my book chapter and generous six star rating. I am honored, my friend.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
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You have a great way of sharing your faith as you write this novel.
Comment from country ranch writer
WellSal things are starting to get more interesting, you be safe and stay alert! The old man will say anything to keep his grandson free.great job ! Good luck with the story waiting to hear more.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2023
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WellSal things are starting to get more interesting, you be safe and stay alert! The old man will say anything to keep his grandson free.great job ! Good luck with the story waiting to hear more.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2023
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Dear Barbara, Thank you for the wonderful review of my book chapter and generous six stars. I am honored.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
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Welcome enjoy your weekend.
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Welcome enjoy your weekend.
Comment from lyenochka
Loved the visions that Greyson had - both the dream which may reveal where Victoria's body is and Patience calling him back to the faith of his youth. I'm sure we'll see a great follow-up about this change.
Sally is a genius to make Paulette comfortable first to make him cooperative. Chocolate is a great idea!
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2023
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Loved the visions that Greyson had - both the dream which may reveal where Victoria's body is and Patience calling him back to the faith of his youth. I'm sure we'll see a great follow-up about this change.
Sally is a genius to make Paulette comfortable first to make him cooperative. Chocolate is a great idea!
Comment Written 17-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2023
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Helen dear, Thank you for the wonderful review of my book chapter and generous six stars. I am honored and blessed, my friend.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
Comment from Ulla
Hi Sally, this is another great chapter. I also want to commend the artwork.. It's amazing.
Now to the chapter, it is as always wonderfully written and full of suspense. Sally, the blind detective always making her mark. Ulla xxx
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2023
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Hi Sally, this is another great chapter. I also want to commend the artwork.. It's amazing.
Now to the chapter, it is as always wonderfully written and full of suspense. Sally, the blind detective always making her mark. Ulla xxx
Comment Written 17-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2023
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Dear Ulla, thank you for the lovely review, compliments and generous stars, my friend. It means so much to me. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Another fluently written chapter, Sally! There is a very touching element to your story when an angel visits Victoria's father in a dream and carries Victoria up to heaven. Also her father reaches up to bring her back, she eludes him. He is promptly brought back to reality with the appearance of Patience. Subsequently - the legal processing of Paulette with his father cutting a very pathetic figure in the interview room. Thank you, Sally, for sharing this latest extract from your fine and well crafted story - an enjoyable read. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023
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Another fluently written chapter, Sally! There is a very touching element to your story when an angel visits Victoria's father in a dream and carries Victoria up to heaven. Also her father reaches up to bring her back, she eludes him. He is promptly brought back to reality with the appearance of Patience. Subsequently - the legal processing of Paulette with his father cutting a very pathetic figure in the interview room. Thank you, Sally, for sharing this latest extract from your fine and well crafted story - an enjoyable read. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 17-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023
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Thank you for the lovely review and generous compliments. All mean so much to me. I'm glad you're staying with me. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
Comment from royowen
I love the throwing in of the Angel, it makes the story more interesting, and although I've never encountered an Angel as have some of my Christian contemporaries, but it certainly adds a dynamic to your stories, and it is scriptural, beautifully written Sally, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2023
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I love the throwing in of the Angel, it makes the story more interesting, and although I've never encountered an Angel as have some of my Christian contemporaries, but it certainly adds a dynamic to your stories, and it is scriptural, beautifully written Sally, blessings Roy
Comment Written 17-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2023
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Thank you, Roy! Sal xo
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Most welcome
Comment from barbara.wilkey
It appears Greyson Cole will get closure, that's good. I am worried about this attorney. She isn't a very likable person. I'm wondering if Simon and Candance will move to Maryland. I am liking this story. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2023
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It appears Greyson Cole will get closure, that's good. I am worried about this attorney. She isn't a very likable person. I'm wondering if Simon and Candance will move to Maryland. I am liking this story. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2023
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Thank you for the lovely review and kind stars. So glad you're enjoying the book. Sending you my best today as always.
Sal XOs
Comment from patcelaw
This is another well written the chapter in your book and I enjoyed listening to it. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. I hope you have a wonderful day. Patricia.
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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2023
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This is another well written the chapter in your book and I enjoyed listening to it. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. I hope you have a wonderful day. Patricia.
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Comment Written 17-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2023
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Patricia dear, Thank you for the lovely review and kind stars. So glad you're enjoying the book. I hope you're feeling better.
Sending you my best today as always.
Sal XOs
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Sally, what a beautiful beginning of your chapter. A vision of the Angel taking Victoria to Heaven. It was heartwarming, and so comforting for the father of the murdered woman. Then he gets a real visitation where Patience takes away his anger and delivers him from that evil, encouraging him to return to his faith.
You leave us with a confession from the warlock about the accidental shooting of the chief, who, we know, survived to attack.
Overall, a feel good chapter...
love and hugs,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2023
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Sally, what a beautiful beginning of your chapter. A vision of the Angel taking Victoria to Heaven. It was heartwarming, and so comforting for the father of the murdered woman. Then he gets a real visitation where Patience takes away his anger and delivers him from that evil, encouraging him to return to his faith.
You leave us with a confession from the warlock about the accidental shooting of the chief, who, we know, survived to attack.
Overall, a feel good chapter...
love and hugs,
Rhonda
Comment Written 17-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2023
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Rhomda dear, thank you for the awesome review and super stars, my Friend! How kind and generous you are. I'm so glad you're enjoying my book. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Superior!! You are m are meant to write stories like these, Sal! This is an example of how detail sets your story apart from others;
clutching it for fear of dropping the glass on the hardwood floor
A small detail but it shows what someone is thinking and feeling in one description of how a glass is held.
I love angels too so I read all your work tonight. Keep up your extraordinary work, Sal!!xoxoxo Alex :))0
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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2023
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Superior!! You are m are meant to write stories like these, Sal! This is an example of how detail sets your story apart from others;
clutching it for fear of dropping the glass on the hardwood floor
A small detail but it shows what someone is thinking and feeling in one description of how a glass is held.
I love angels too so I read all your work tonight. Keep up your extraordinary work, Sal!!xoxoxo Alex :))0
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Comment Written 17-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2023
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Dear Alex, thank you for the excellent review and kindest compliments. I will private mail you today with some of my writing tips.
Sending you my best today as always,
Love,
Sal XOs
