Reviews from

Coffee With Iris

Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "Old Friends"
Two opposites meet and connect.

15 total reviews 
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

What a surprise Jameson is going to get further down the line. It makes me wonder if Claire will have a 'sudden' change of mind when she finds out. That Jameson has made Iris's life a little brighter, and she feels he's more family to her than her blood relations, is something that is happening a lot now. It's sad that she is in the last throes of life but it's nice that she has Jameson's friendship. Super story, my friend, so well written, and I'm thoroughly enjoying it. :)) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 11-Jul-2023
    She won't tell him yet, simply because she doesn't want him to tell Claire. Thanks for this. Gretchen
Comment from damommy
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

From the way Mitchell talks, Iris must have a lot to leave Jameson. What a surprise that will be! Iris is trying to be realistic about her imminent death, but she's not as accepting as she lets on. She mustn't die just yet, please.

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 11-Jul-2023
    Shes not ready yet. She's not done nurturing Jameson. Thank you for this. Gretchen
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

So Iris has left her worldly wealth to Jameson? Wow! He will get a surprise, but not yet I hope. It is funny how friendships can turn out to be beneficial! Ha ha ha, a fine part of the story, although I do feel sad at one of your characters slowly dying Gretchen, it is so realistic, love Dolly x x x

This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 11-Jul-2023
    Thank you so much, Dolly. I'm glad you're still enjoying this. Gretchen
Comment from Sankey
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Hey, look! I still had another six for another beautiful chapter of the Iris and Jameson relationship. Now for your other story. No spags, anywhere in here, today.

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 11-Jul-2023
    Thank you so much. I'm glad you are enjoying this. Gretchen
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

This is such a lovely chapter. Iris knows how to value a friendship, even one of very short duration. She also has the perfect advice for her lawyer, don't waste time, life is short.

This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 11-Jul-2023
    Thanks, Carol. Iris is a pretty wise character. Thank you for this nice review. Gretchen