The Matchmaker
A conversation at the concert.16 total reviews
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
New in town and trying to make friends is quite complicated in your story. Sometimes making friends can be a little hairy these days. You just can't pick a subject out of the crowd unless you know them. Enjoyed reading.
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New in town and trying to make friends is quite complicated in your story. Sometimes making friends can be a little hairy these days. You just can't pick a subject out of the crowd unless you know them. Enjoyed reading.
Comment Written 11-May-2023
Comment from Teri7
This is very well written dialogue you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words that helped reading the dialogue. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
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This is very well written dialogue you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words that helped reading the dialogue. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 11-May-2023
Comment from Douglas Goff
Well, that guy's answers would have annoyed me to no end. I'm fairly certain I would have went and sat with Todd before his invitation.
Nicely done. My o Lu suggestion would be a darker blue.
Thanks for sharing and good luck!
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Well, that guy's answers would have annoyed me to no end. I'm fairly certain I would have went and sat with Todd before his invitation.
Nicely done. My o Lu suggestion would be a darker blue.
Thanks for sharing and good luck!
Comment Written 11-May-2023
Comment from BethShelby
This is a cute story. I've known a few jokers who would give answers tlike this guy did. He does seem to be looking out for his nephew. I the boy appreciate him. Good writing for the contest.
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This is a cute story. I've known a few jokers who would give answers tlike this guy did. He does seem to be looking out for his nephew. I the boy appreciate him. Good writing for the contest.
Comment Written 11-May-2023
Comment from Ginda Simpson
Your story unfolds smoothly using dialogue only, not always easy to do. It is easy to imagine the theater where it is taking place. Good entry for the contest. Best of luck.
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Your story unfolds smoothly using dialogue only, not always easy to do. It is easy to imagine the theater where it is taking place. Good entry for the contest. Best of luck.
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Comment Written 10-May-2023
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Yes a pedantic man who takes all words literally and will not make friends with this kind of attitude, a fun post for the contest, I wish you luck, love Dolly x
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Yes a pedantic man who takes all words literally and will not make friends with this kind of attitude, a fun post for the contest, I wish you luck, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 10-May-2023
