Relationships Are Fragile
It's best not to get involved in another's love life.28 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
So true, Beth, about meddling where one shouldn't.
You did a great job with this theme. It could apply to
anyone in any relationship. I liked the way you formatted
the lines with the different bold/not bold font. It was
easy to follow. Your conversation for this prompt was
expressed well. You gave readers much to think about.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
reply by the author on 13-May-2023
So true, Beth, about meddling where one shouldn't.
You did a great job with this theme. It could apply to
anyone in any relationship. I liked the way you formatted
the lines with the different bold/not bold font. It was
easy to follow. Your conversation for this prompt was
expressed well. You gave readers much to think about.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 12-May-2023
reply by the author on 13-May-2023
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Thank you Jan, I really appreciate the your insightful comments.
I'm glad you like my story in dialogue and found it easy to follow.
Beth
Comment from Bill Schott
This dialogue story, Relationships are Fragile, could happen any day to anyone. This is a slice of life for sure. It's a wonder how someone can be motivated to act through such random actions.
reply by the author on 12-May-2023
This dialogue story, Relationships are Fragile, could happen any day to anyone. This is a slice of life for sure. It's a wonder how someone can be motivated to act through such random actions.
Comment Written 12-May-2023
reply by the author on 12-May-2023
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Thank you Bill, I appreciate the review and comments. This is only partially fiction. The names were changed and I was the one motivated to get married because I thought I waas about to lose him.
Beth
Comment from Spitfire
Well done. A short play with a well-thought out conflict and a denouement. Clever thinking to have everything turn out well. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-May-2023
Well done. A short play with a well-thought out conflict and a denouement. Clever thinking to have everything turn out well. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-May-2023
reply by the author on 12-May-2023
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Thanks for the review and comments. I'm glad you liked my little dialogue only story.
Beth
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Beth--great story! Karma's a bitch! I figured I'd pop in to your place and catch up to Remembering Yesterday in the event I missed any chapters--lo and behold--I found this at 14--congrats on your blue ribbon pending. Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 12-May-2023
Beth--great story! Karma's a bitch! I figured I'd pop in to your place and catch up to Remembering Yesterday in the event I missed any chapters--lo and behold--I found this at 14--congrats on your blue ribbon pending. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 12-May-2023
reply by the author on 12-May-2023
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Thank for bumping it for me to number 15. It's actually a sort of a true story with name changes. My husband brother was the jerk to forced me to think I was about to lose him by telling him he saw me in the restaurant with the guys. I agreed to marry him that weekend and never regretted it.
Comment from Wendy G
Jumping to conclusions by bystanders has caused the downfall of many relationships, so this dialogue is true to life, and you wrote it well. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 12-May-2023
Jumping to conclusions by bystanders has caused the downfall of many relationships, so this dialogue is true to life, and you wrote it well. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 12-May-2023
reply by the author on 12-May-2023
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Thank you, Wendy. I really appreciate the review and comments.
Comment from Wayne Fowler
You dialogued it! Tag free! Good work.
Too bad about Jake being the best man, though. He clearly isn't best man material.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-May-2023
You dialogued it! Tag free! Good work.
Too bad about Jake being the best man, though. He clearly isn't best man material.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-May-2023
reply by the author on 11-May-2023
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Thank you, Wayne. I really appreciate the review and you neat comments.
Comment from royowen
Isn't life so ironic, fancy that, things can end up in reverse to what one thinks, we shouldn't look too deeply into things, poke our noses where it doesn't belong, trouble is, nothing is guaranteed in this life, beautifully written, excellent entry in this contest, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 11-May-2023
Isn't life so ironic, fancy that, things can end up in reverse to what one thinks, we shouldn't look too deeply into things, poke our noses where it doesn't belong, trouble is, nothing is guaranteed in this life, beautifully written, excellent entry in this contest, blessings Roy
Comment Written 11-May-2023
reply by the author on 11-May-2023
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Thanks for the great review. I appreciate you comments, Roy.
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A pleasure
Comment from LJbutterfly
This was an intriguing conversation between Jake and Sandi. Jake originally denied telling Steve he saw Sandi at a restaurant. But in the end, Steve thanked Jake for being a tattletale. It hastened Steve and Sandi's engagement, while Jake and Cheryl broke up. Great story. Your chosen picture paired perfectly with the dialogue. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-May-2023
This was an intriguing conversation between Jake and Sandi. Jake originally denied telling Steve he saw Sandi at a restaurant. But in the end, Steve thanked Jake for being a tattletale. It hastened Steve and Sandi's engagement, while Jake and Cheryl broke up. Great story. Your chosen picture paired perfectly with the dialogue. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 11-May-2023
reply by the author on 11-May-2023
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Thank you so much for a great review. I appreciate your comments.
Comment from mermaids
I enjoyed reading this dialog. I like the happy ending of the couple getting married. Everything is not what it seems as shown in your tale here, we must be careful when choosing to speak about what we see. Your dialog flows smoothly and is true to life.
reply by the author on 11-May-2023
I enjoyed reading this dialog. I like the happy ending of the couple getting married. Everything is not what it seems as shown in your tale here, we must be careful when choosing to speak about what we see. Your dialog flows smoothly and is true to life.
Comment Written 11-May-2023
reply by the author on 11-May-2023
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Thank you so much for a great review. It is pretty close to being the true story of why I got married when I did.
Comment from Mario PIERRE
The story conforms to the prompt, in word count and it stayed with dialogue only. I enjoyed it, and the storyline is good. The dialogue feels real, although I would have liked them to be in a shorter flow... But overall, it's a sound story.
reply by the author on 11-May-2023
The story conforms to the prompt, in word count and it stayed with dialogue only. I enjoyed it, and the storyline is good. The dialogue feels real, although I would have liked them to be in a shorter flow... But overall, it's a sound story.
Comment Written 11-May-2023
reply by the author on 11-May-2023
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Thank you Mario. I appreciate the review and comments. It is very close to be a true story.
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Oh! OK... I liked it.