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Peanut Butter and Jelly

A Dialogue story

15 total reviews 
Comment from karenina
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I've got to say writing dialogue has always intimidated me. If I was ever going to try it I'd like it to be this way...just straight dialogue with no tags, etc. You've taken a fairly conventional conversation I can imagine many a child having on school lunch break and made it a fun read. Hmm. I've never had blackberry jelly either. (Might have to get me some of that!)

Karenina

 Comment Written 10-May-2023


reply by the author on 10-May-2023
    Smiles and giggles,thank-you
reply by karenina on 10-May-2023
    I'll take giggles. Giggles are always great!
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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That was really funny, and good. A dialogue only story, all about peanut butter and jelly. I have never eaten one, it's not a sandwich filling you see here in England. You did a job with this, and I wish you the best of luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 10-May-2023


reply by the author on 10-May-2023
    Thank you, Sandra.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I have always wondered what jelly is? Is it jam? I have never tasted one of these sandwiches before so I found your dialogue post interesting, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 10-May-2023


reply by the author on 10-May-2023
    Jelly is less dense, Jam is much more preferred.
Comment from LJbutterfly
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Reading this dialogue was like listening in while two friendly sixth graders had a conversation about what they might do on the weekend. Your chosen artwork paired perfectly with the dialogue and intensified your message. Best wishes in the contest.

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 Comment Written 10-May-2023


reply by the author on 10-May-2023
    LJ, thanks!
Comment from royowen
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Isn't that Judy wonderful? Two people in complete agreement, and about all things pertaining to peanut butter and jelly, it's hard enough for people to agree on thing, this is a miracle, a wonderful job my friend, good luck, blessings Roy

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 Comment Written 10-May-2023


reply by the author on 10-May-2023
    Thank you.