Abba, Father
A Bible Acrostic19 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and presentation.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-I like the font color for the first letter.
-Good word choices, as well.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-May-2023
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-Very nice image and presentation.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-I like the font color for the first letter.
-Good word choices, as well.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-May-2023
reply by the author on 07-May-2023
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Thank you my dear friend!
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent poem about a Bible Acrostic poem. You chose good words a Bible verse but I would like to see the lines connect grammatically, like in the example. I think it would improve the flow.
the structure makes sense, it draws on emotions and it presents strong images.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 07-May-2023
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Excellent poem about a Bible Acrostic poem. You chose good words a Bible verse but I would like to see the lines connect grammatically, like in the example. I think it would improve the flow.
the structure makes sense, it draws on emotions and it presents strong images.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 06-May-2023
reply by the author on 07-May-2023
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Helen, I see your point and have made adequate improvement. Thank you for your wisdom.
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I'm not Helen, I'm Gypsy. :)
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Oh for crying out loud....I am so, so, sorry, what a nitwit... Need to sign off for a while I guess..
Comment from Douglas Goff
This is elegant in its simplicity. Same with he picture. Everything matches up quite nicely.
Good luck in the upcoming contest. I expect the competition t be stiff and formidable as several Master Poets breathe, sleep and dream in the genre. To battle!
D
reply by the author on 07-May-2023
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This is elegant in its simplicity. Same with he picture. Everything matches up quite nicely.
Good luck in the upcoming contest. I expect the competition t be stiff and formidable as several Master Poets breathe, sleep and dream in the genre. To battle!
D
Comment Written 06-May-2023
reply by the author on 07-May-2023
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Thanks Douglas. I not being a Master poet feel privileged to be in such prestigious company, so I feel I that I am in some sense already a winner.
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Don?t kid yourself. You are the masteryist of poets
Comment from Lea Tonin1
Hello there? This is a fine choice for a Palm and a great? Picture too. Are you done a fine job at the acrostic poetry challenge. I like the green in the picture and the word choices for your poem as well. You may wish to check your author's notes. There seems to be some system glitch work put in a bunch of gibberish little?s and a's and things like that you may to delete.
Or another small suggestion suggest changing your 1st word slightly from "absolute" to "absolutely".
Seems to sound better that way when spoken allowed.
These things do not take away from the beauty of your poem or the fineness of its submission. I quite enjoyed it very much wait a minute. I don't need to borrow any suggestions for food for thought. I hope this helps have a great evening!
reply by the author on 06-May-2023
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Hello there? This is a fine choice for a Palm and a great? Picture too. Are you done a fine job at the acrostic poetry challenge. I like the green in the picture and the word choices for your poem as well. You may wish to check your author's notes. There seems to be some system glitch work put in a bunch of gibberish little?s and a's and things like that you may to delete.
Or another small suggestion suggest changing your 1st word slightly from "absolute" to "absolutely".
Seems to sound better that way when spoken allowed.
These things do not take away from the beauty of your poem or the fineness of its submission. I quite enjoyed it very much wait a minute. I don't need to borrow any suggestions for food for thought. I hope this helps have a great evening!
Comment Written 06-May-2023
reply by the author on 06-May-2023
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Thanks very much Lea!
Comment from Ginda Simpson
I love how you have taken our Father's name, Abba, and used it for this acrostic poem. You have taken four, certainly not all, of the attributes of the Almighty and made it read like a prayer of praise. Well done.
reply by the author on 06-May-2023
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I love how you have taken our Father's name, Abba, and used it for this acrostic poem. You have taken four, certainly not all, of the attributes of the Almighty and made it read like a prayer of praise. Well done.
Comment Written 06-May-2023
reply by the author on 06-May-2023
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Thank you, Ginda.
Comment from royowen
Oh yes indeed, there is none like you oh Lord, you put off your royalty and riches of Heaven to rescue this unworthy wretch, this is a great entry in this acrostic contest, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 06-May-2023
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Oh yes indeed, there is none like you oh Lord, you put off your royalty and riches of Heaven to rescue this unworthy wretch, this is a great entry in this acrostic contest, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 06-May-2023
reply by the author on 06-May-2023
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Thank you, my Austrialian connection!
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Bless you
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I loved the picture and the presentation, Mystery
Author. Your word used to build the entry was
great. Thanks for the notes, too. I liked the use
of two colors of font. Your words were well chosen,
descriptive, and brought to mind the Lord immediately.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
reply by the author on 06-May-2023
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I loved the picture and the presentation, Mystery
Author. Your word used to build the entry was
great. Thanks for the notes, too. I liked the use
of two colors of font. Your words were well chosen,
descriptive, and brought to mind the Lord immediately.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 06-May-2023
reply by the author on 06-May-2023
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Thank you, Jan.
Comment from Regina Elliott
Breathtakingly beauteous
Christian concise acrostic,
dear poet. I extend my very
best wishes for the competition, it's a strong
contender. Many blessings ~
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reply by the author on 06-May-2023
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Breathtakingly beauteous
Christian concise acrostic,
dear poet. I extend my very
best wishes for the competition, it's a strong
contender. Many blessings ~
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Comment Written 06-May-2023
reply by the author on 06-May-2023
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Regina, I am already a winner Knowing Abba, Father. Thank you...
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine religious acrostic full of faith and hope for the contest, I wish you luck and your few words resonate with me, well chosen and perfectly formed, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 06-May-2023
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A fine religious acrostic full of faith and hope for the contest, I wish you luck and your few words resonate with me, well chosen and perfectly formed, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 06-May-2023
reply by the author on 06-May-2023
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Dolly, thank you!