A Short Love Ode
Love Pragmatism16 total reviews
Comment from jessizero
This was a sweet poem. I liked the sentiment behind it, and I liked that every line rhymed. Thank you for sharing this here, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 06-May-2023
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This was a sweet poem. I liked the sentiment behind it, and I liked that every line rhymed. Thank you for sharing this here, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 06-May-2023
reply by the author on 06-May-2023
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Thank you so much. Greatly appreciated.
Comment from Mary Shifman
This is a charming poem that says it all in a few words. Better not to hope and guess but to get it out in the open right away: I'm in love with you, if you don't love me, too, let's just split. Now get! :) So much better than hanging in limbo. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-May-2023
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This is a charming poem that says it all in a few words. Better not to hope and guess but to get it out in the open right away: I'm in love with you, if you don't love me, too, let's just split. Now get! :) So much better than hanging in limbo. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-May-2023
reply by the author on 06-May-2023
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Thank you so much. You get it completely!
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You are welcome.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and presentation.
-You wrote a good poem with effective imagery and rhyme.
-Very good meter, as well, makes for a smooth read.
-You do a good job expressing your love in lines 1 and 2.
-I also like your perspective in the last two lines.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-May-2023
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-Very nice image and presentation.
-You wrote a good poem with effective imagery and rhyme.
-Very good meter, as well, makes for a smooth read.
-You do a good job expressing your love in lines 1 and 2.
-I also like your perspective in the last two lines.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-May-2023
reply by the author on 06-May-2023
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Thank you so much.
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You are welcome.
Comment from LisaMay
This is indeed a very pragmatic poem - love me or leave me. Yep, no point in hankering after something that isn't going to happen. Still, it is always sad to suffer an unrequited love.
reply by the author on 06-May-2023
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This is indeed a very pragmatic poem - love me or leave me. Yep, no point in hankering after something that isn't going to happen. Still, it is always sad to suffer an unrequited love.
Comment Written 06-May-2023
reply by the author on 06-May-2023
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Thank you so much.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a short and sweet ode to love and I see birds in a mating dance in my town as it is the mating season and those who are shy can fly away, and they are often chased in the skies, your words are gentle and endearing, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 06-May-2023
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This is a short and sweet ode to love and I see birds in a mating dance in my town as it is the mating season and those who are shy can fly away, and they are often chased in the skies, your words are gentle and endearing, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 06-May-2023
reply by the author on 06-May-2023
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Thank you so much.
Comment from Janel Mock
The image just sets the mood for the entire poem!! I love everything about this! Fly away... I often feel this way myself. Just let me love you and if you won't let me, fly away... thank you for sharing. ~Janel
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reply by the author on 06-May-2023
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The image just sets the mood for the entire poem!! I love everything about this! Fly away... I often feel this way myself. Just let me love you and if you won't let me, fly away... thank you for sharing. ~Janel
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Comment Written 06-May-2023
reply by the author on 06-May-2023
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Thank you so much.
