Love and Loss
Viewing comments for Chapter 25 "While You Can"NaPoWriMo April Poetry Contest
30 total reviews
Comment from Janel Mock
This personally speaks to me because I am no longer waiting for anything. If I want it, I am doing whatever I can to get it! I love learning and challenging myself and forgiving is a hard one for me!
Taking it one day at a time. I love this!
~Janel
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
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This personally speaks to me because I am no longer waiting for anything. If I want it, I am doing whatever I can to get it! I love learning and challenging myself and forgiving is a hard one for me!
Taking it one day at a time. I love this!
~Janel
Comment Written 30-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
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Well said, Janel!! I couldn't agree more. Thank you for your review!
Xo
Jessica
Comment from Faith Williams
Congratulations on your first-place win, Jessica. Your short poem conveys some wise words to live by. Life is short, too short to waste on unforgiveness. Again, congratulations!
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Congratulations on your first-place win, Jessica. Your short poem conveys some wise words to live by. Life is short, too short to waste on unforgiveness. Again, congratulations!
Comment Written 30-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much, Faith!
Comment from Regina Elliott
This is a profound and so
very important poem on the
act of forgiveness. Well penned. I would say best
wishes for the contest, but I
think you're going to win
for sure. Congratulations :)))
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This is a profound and so
very important poem on the
act of forgiveness. Well penned. I would say best
wishes for the contest, but I
think you're going to win
for sure. Congratulations :)))
Comment Written 30-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
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Regina, thank you so much! I greatly appreciate the feedback and stars.
Comment from jaded831
Wise advice, people hold on to silly discretions to the grave. Forgiveness helps you more than the other person. The other person more than likely isn't giving it a thought. Great entry, so far your number one.
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Wise advice, people hold on to silly discretions to the grave. Forgiveness helps you more than the other person. The other person more than likely isn't giving it a thought. Great entry, so far your number one.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much! Well said. I appreciate the stars and feedback!
Comment from WalkerMan
Yours is the wisest post in this contest, and I happen to have a spare Six
left to give it. You are right about the importance of time in such a
situation. This post will be memorable, whether or not you win the contest. :)) -- Mike
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Yours is the wisest post in this contest, and I happen to have a spare Six
left to give it. You are right about the importance of time in such a
situation. This post will be memorable, whether or not you win the contest. :)) -- Mike
Comment Written 29-Apr-2023
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That means a lot, Mike, thank you!
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You are most welcome. :)) -- Mike
Comment from Julie Lau
You have written a very effective 2-8-2 poem with an extremely worthwhile message. The image, font and colours are well-chosen. Good luck in the contest!
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You have written a very effective 2-8-2 poem with an extremely worthwhile message. The image, font and colours are well-chosen. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 29-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much, Julie!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 2-8-2 writing prompt contest. Forgiving is so important for a good life. I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Good luck!!!
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
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Excellent entry for the 2-8-2 writing prompt contest. Forgiving is so important for a good life. I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Good luck!!!
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 29-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much, Gypsy!
Comment from Kerry Foley
This is an absolutely stunning poem. I love it. I actually read it in the booth this morning and voted for you.
Well done and congratulations!
Kerry
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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This is an absolutely stunning poem. I love it. I actually read it in the booth this morning and voted for you.
Well done and congratulations!
Kerry
Comment Written 29-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much, Kerry!
Comment from Mintybee
Well done! 2-8-2 is hard, and you've managed an important thought, aba rhyme, and internal rhyme in the second line. The poem flows naturally. The visual you used is striking.
Mintybee
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Well done! 2-8-2 is hard, and you've managed an important thought, aba rhyme, and internal rhyme in the second line. The poem flows naturally. The visual you used is striking.
Mintybee
Comment Written 29-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much!! I appreciate your feedback and stars so much!
Comment from royowen
Oh yes, one of the things that is necessary to keep us out of the clutches of a living death is letting go of the things that will hold us in bondage, and unforgiveness is one of the worst, great advice, and beautifully written, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
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Oh yes, one of the things that is necessary to keep us out of the clutches of a living death is letting go of the things that will hold us in bondage, and unforgiveness is one of the worst, great advice, and beautifully written, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 29-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much, Roy!
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